This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission.  Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice.  The author would appreciate your comments

Category:  Parody/Poetry
 

Simple Rhyme

By

Tami <tamishy@webtv.net>

There's a time to cry,
there's a time to sigh.
But now it's time to dry your eye.

There's a time to beg,
and a time to plead.
But now you've gotten what you need.

It's all over now,
time for forgiving.
No more sinning in this life your living.

Now's the time to be good.
But even if you believed you could.
The question is, if you would.

The End

© Copyright Summer, 2002

Reviews

Abrat4you  <abrat4you(at)aol(dot)com>
Cute little rhyme...catchy ending...and I vote for no, he or she wouldn't :)

Anne  <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
This was a finely written melodic poem, capturing the tender hearted feelings of the punisher. The use of rhyme was so very sublime. This verse is delicate and sweet, for us readers a nice little treat.

Needy Wench  <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Paul Simon wrote "I'd rather be a hammer than a nail, if I could, I surely would." Paul would later comment, to those that labeled his work poetry, "Robert Frost is a poet; I'm just Rhymin' Simon." That being said, your work rhymes, it has content, and makes valid comment on spanking. Set to music, it would be a nice lyric.

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