This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody/Poetry **The hell with it: Brian, I'm doing 'P's anyway! :)
'P'enultimate
By
Courtney <Courtenesca@aol.com>
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Pacing
Pragmatic
Peaches
Plump
Pastiche
Principalities:
Priap's Prison perilous. |
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Penultimate? No. Pre-eminent? Yes. Pithy, precise, pervading prose. Practically perfect.
Haron <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Painfully paradoxical, peacefully paced, purely passionate piece.
Simon <srb(at)imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
The alphabet poems continue with this interesting effort. Some interesting choices of words here, but once more there is a lack of overall structure which weakens an otherwise interesting concept.
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
This one works quite well, I think. Whilst the content is quirky and elliptical, there's enough of a sense of narrative to carry through. I think it might work slightly better if the single-word lines were combined in most cases. It's a little too fragmented as it is. «Phallus palace» is nice, all the more striking for being an extremely rare rhyme in this form.