This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody/Poetry
'R'med & Dangerous
By
Courtney <Courtenesca@aol.com>
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Reality reeks... Revels return.
Restive rearranging.
Rumps redundant.
Recaptured ronin.
Resurgent rebels.
Reaming reception.
Rambunctious rams.
Resplendent rivers.
Rampant rod.
Rectum receives...
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The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Margaret <wessyLA(at)aol(dot)com>
Really relevant. Rowdily rousing.
Pam <pamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
Really rocks. Rather rapturous riting. Rhapsodic rapping. Ripping. Really.
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
A picture is created here without shape and line, but by individual points, like a Seurat. Up close there doesn't seem to be any sense to be made, yet once the whole can be seen, a vivid picture emerges. I might like to see longer sentences attempted, though. It's certainly very tough to do, but the single and two-word phrases can be just too disjointed at times.
Kate <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
As I stated in another review of these alphabet poems, the only thing I can say honestly is that they did not work for me. The lists of words seems almost completely random aside from their common first letters, with far-reaching references to spanking that for the most part are more grotesque than titillating. To the author's credit, this was a huge undertaking and it must have been quite difficult to come up with anything at all for every letter.