This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody/Poetry
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A Kiss
A Touch
A Swat
A grasp
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The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Louise <louise(at)nunn58(dot)freeserve(dot)co(dot)uk>
I really like this. I found it powerful and evocative. The words were obviously chosen with care and their meaning is clear.
Very exciting and I can easily identify with the feelings involved :) Fabulous
Haron <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Very sweet poem - and hot, too. It left me hungry for some spanking action - preferably soon. Well structured, well written - good job.
Alex Birch <alexbirch(at)blueyonder(dot)co(dot)uk>
I' m afraid I am to poetry what Col. Sanders is to gourmet cuisine but given my limited qualifications, I thought this short piece flowed nicely with a cadence and a feeling that made it very readable. Very nice.
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
A well-executed poem, with good balance, and a successful format. The rhythm of the poem captures something of the rhythm of a spanking, as well. Good job.