This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody/Poetry
'M'utations
By
Courtney <Courtenesca@aol.com>
Merry Madness
Mushily Madcap Maladroit Misfires
Magnificent Mania Mirthful Meandering
Mutilated Muse Masturbating Mystics
Maximum Mobility Moods'n Militants
Momentous Mounds Minstrels Magic
Miracle Mansions |
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Tami <tamishy(at)webtv(dot)net>
Ok, I must have missed something, was this about spankings. I think poetry and creative control took over here. As a poem this is great, as a spanking story it's not. Sorry if I missed it.
Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I'm sorry, but unlike your F and H entries, I really don't see much, if any, connection to spanking in this one. There are several quite suggestive possibilities in the M section of the dictionary - Merciless Master, Manacled Masochist, etc. As it stands, the poem has some potential, but doesn't quite fit the bill (IMHO, of course).
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Matadors? <smile> Unfortunately I think the severe constraints of the form win out in this case. The phrases - choice as they might be - don't really hang together in any sort of coherent flow. I like 'momentous mounds' though. Well, who doesn't?
RCG <rcg1574(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I'm sure that was harder to write than it appears at first sight. With some patience and imagination this becomes more than a collection of words.