This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody/Poetry
'L' Train
By
Courtney <Courtenesca@aol.com>
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Learning from
Life Lessons
Lucky Lechery
Limelight
Lingering Licks
Leashes
Limbs longing
Locomotive lust. |
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Simon <srb(at)imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
One of the more successful of the alphabet poems. The words chosen combine well to create a definite image, although some are more effective than others.
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
This poem has a lush sensuality to it that I like a lot. It doesn't feel as spankcentric as some of the other alphabet poems, but it works just as well on its own terms.
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
I like the way this starts - there's a nice hint of a submissive urge there. The rest of the poem is good too, and doesn't try to be too long, which can be a killer when the form is so constrained. It seems very much focused on the sexual act, though, and spanking is a little hard to discern.
MollyB <mollyb(at)newsguy(dot)com>
«Locomotive lust» is an interesting concept.