This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody/Poetry I came up with this a few days ago, so I was glad to see the poetry category again this year.
Haiku
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Hand on bare bottom
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The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
This poem has a wonderful symmetry to it. The way Jen switches from the spanker's to the spankee's point of view is really satisfying, and gives the poem a more narrative feel than I expected. Simple, elegant, and very well done.
Jodi <ladiejj(at)webtv(dot)net>
This is a nice classic Haiku. It deals with the simple pleasures of spanking. It says a lot in so few words. Very well written.
Pam <pamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
I like this haiku that Jen wrote. I believe it is quite evocotive of the whole anticipation thing about certain spankings. I can envision the scene quite well. Very nice.
MollyB <mollyb(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Efficient and evocative.