This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody/Poetry
'H'arbor
By
Courtney <Courtenesca@aol.com>
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Happenstance.
Heat-seeking hybrids.
Hyper-drive.
Haven...
Heinie harvest.
Harem.
Hysterical.
Hydrogen hail.
Heraldic herd.
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The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Horredously hackneyed hogwash! Heralds humiliating hazing? Hard hickory hairbrush, harshly hitting haunches. Howling horny hussy, hips heaving, hole hotly humid. Handsome, hung he-man hammering her. Habitually.
Er, sorry - I think I got a bit carried away there. Nice poem, actually, despite the first sentence above. Maybe we should get together and, uh, compare dictionaries, sometime?
Haron <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Handsomely harmonious, healthily hallucinogenic... Hilarious!
Kate <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
As I stated in another review of these alphabet poems, the only thing I can say honestly is that they did not work for me. The lists of words seems almost completely random aside from their common first letters, with far-reaching references to spanking that for the most part are more grotesque than titillating. To the author's credit, this was a huge undertaking and it must have been quite difficult to come up with anything at all for every letter.
Tami <tamishy(at)webtv(dot)net>
This almost makes sense to me. More than the others do. I admit maybe I didn't give these alphabet rhymes a standing chance. But this take so long to digest into the system. It's kind of hard to get into.
But obviously a lot of work when into this one. Nice job.