This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody/Poetry
'C' How It Works
By
Courtney <Courtenesca@aol.com>
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Carefree.
Combatant Cupcake. Conservative.
Commander. Compatible?
Coming Conflagration. Cupcake claws.
Comprehension.
Communion complete. |
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Anne <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
What a clever, complete, compilation of the consonant C. This canny, compelling, and creative collection manages to captivate the crowd with Courtney's crafty critique. How commendable!
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
What Courtney's attempted here is extraordinarily difficult. It leaves so little freedom that the creation of anything of coherence and substance is a minor triumph. Which this one is. There's a real story here, no matter how concisely it's told. The words strain here and there, but in doing so show some wonderfully quirky choices too. An original approach, successfully executed.
Simon <srb(at)imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
A second poem based around words beginning with the same letter, and one which I thought worked better than B Team. It had more of a sense of structure and narrative progression. Again some effective use of alliteration, and some interesting images. I thought «Combatant Cupcake» was particularly funny and evocative.
Mary Catherine <marycatherine(at)saintfrancis-sfg(dot)net>
An interesting and unique poem. Difficult to accomplish given the limitation of a single character as a common element, but it works quite nicely.