This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody/Poetry
D' Demographic
By
Courtney <Courtenesca@aol.com>
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Déclassé'.
Discipline Demands.
Demeaning Delight.
Deliverance.
Development.
Drama.
Devices.
Devil's Damnation. |
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Tami <tamishy(at)webtv(dot)net>
daringly delightful, devilishly devious. This story is DIN-O-MITE. Interesting form, and I can only assuming frustrating to develop. Effort pays off, nice job.
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Not quite so successful, this one. The sense is a little of being bounced around between different feelings, rather than following a progression. Still, some evocative bits here and there.
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
This fourth entry in Court's alphabetical series includes some devilishly delightful images. I especially like the first bit, in which the desirous domain is denuded. A fun read.
Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I'm sorry, but the more of these I review (this is about the fifth), the less satisfied I become with the genre. Unlike some of the later entries, this one at least pays lip-service to the requirements of punctuation, however even in poetry a single word does not normally constitute a valid sentence. Occasionally, perhaps - but not when repeated to the extent that it is here. There does not seem to be any recognizable pattern to the verses either. Why do they all have different, seemingly random rhythmic structures? Needless to say, there is no attempt at rhyming either. Of course I don't expect a poem to have all of these elements (syntax, meter, and rhyme), but without any of them, it comes across - as I said in one of my other reviews - as just a list of somewhat related words.