This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Tingles
By
The spanking had been thorough. Jimmy would remember it for a long time. It hadn't been torture, just a sound over-the-knee bare-bottom warming. Twenty minutes later he stood smirking in the corner: shorts around ankles, underpants stretched between knees. The tender tingle behind had become a tautening tingle in front.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Margaret <wessyLA(at)aol(dot)com>
I really liked this. The spare, elegant delivery makes every word count. I also liked getting the male POV. It's not represented nearly enough. Thank you for sending this in.
Abrat4you <abrat4you(at)aol(dot)com>
Nice play on words...tingle both in the front and back...yup, he's hooked!!!
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
This story makes good use of the very short format with memorable imagery, precise language, and a simply wonderful last line. Well done.
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Nice, but I did not share in Jimmy's tingles behind, in front, or otherwise after reading it. Mini-sagas are like that, though...a snapshot which can be either just a nice picture, or deeply moving...and its a fine line to tread.