This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Tommy
By
Sarah Nada <circler73@hotmail.com>
Tommy's mother screams, her red red mouth shaping the words Stop Frank stop! He's just a baby! That's enough!
Tommy's father doesn't listen or just doesn't care, holds Tommy by the scruff of the neck as his belt slashes through the air.
Tommy hates his mother more. He is no baby.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Jodi <ladiejj(at)webtv(dot)net>
I like this ending line. You can see these thoughts going through this kids mind. Even with few words you get a good sense of the characters, and small piece of their lives.. nicely done.
Alex Birch <alexbirch(at)blueyonder(dot)co(dot)uk>
I liked this one, although I may have read more into it than intended, but in those few brief words the writer has captured a set of family values. I liked the punch line suggesting that to many men weakness is despised more than violence. My review is now probably longer than the story <g>
Pam <pamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
Whoa!!! This was fabulous. I cannot believe so much got packed into so few words. This is sooooo not my kink and yet it is probably the most powerful story I've read.
Steve <steve(at)circuslights(dot)com>
Not a huge fan of these mini-sagas. And this one just doesn't do anything for me.