This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga This story's setting is on Super Sunday of 2002 in the U.S.A.
Timing
By
The Crimson Kid <CrimsnKid6@aol.com>
"Over my lap," I instructed Paul.
He complied grudgingly. "You don't know--"
"In case." I lowered his seat flap, exposing his trembling buttcheeks.
"Unfair, Brittany..."
"Timing." I raised the smooth-backed hairbrush. "Immediate bet payment."
The official's arms flew upward, my arm swung downward.
SMACK!! Game ended, my fun just started...
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Tami <tamishy(at)webtv(dot)net>
A new way of wagering, I like it. I'm not sure if it's completely fair though. But if you bet, then you must be prepared to lose in the end. Cute little story.
Abrat4you <abrat4you(at)aol(dot)com>
Nicely written...alot said in a few words...never bet more then you can pay :)
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
This is cute, though a little insubstantial. It's to create real depth in so few words, obviously. Perhaps what's missing here is something of the unexpected, something a little more quirky. It would have been nice to know, for example, what would have happened had the bet gone the other way.
Anne <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
An amusing way to place a wager. It makes me wonder do we have two winners here? I liked how the author wastes NO TIME in collecting her winnings. This short piece elicited a few chuckles from me.