This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
The Special Room
By
I nearly missed the door. I slipped on the narrow metal stairs. Despite the warning, I struck my head on the low hanging pipes. But PK was right. The room was perfect. I screamed at the top of my lungs with every lash, unheard over the roar of the compressors.
The End
© Copyright by BCC June 15, 2002
Reviews
Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I picture myself exploring the labyrinthine basements of a certain college campus in search of a somewhat scary playroom such as this. A brilliantly evocative Mini-Saga, and a great idea for those who like to play heavily but live in thin-walled apartments.
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
The Special Room is an excellent mini-saga because it feels complete in its own right, even when alluding to characters and acts that don't turn up on camera. I like the concise, descriptive language, and the last line is just perfect.
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
This is an intriguing beginning, but I felt like it was over far too quickly. It raised a lot of questions for me--where are they, what are they doing, and so forth. It shows a lot of skill that you've grabbed the reader's attention this quickly. I just wish that this had been a regular SSC entry, so that my curiosity could have been eased.