This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
The Sign
By
Wooz <Wooz_member@newsguy.com>
He strolled through the giant mall nonchalantly, unknowingly.
Taped on his back was a makeshift sign.
Naughty ladies spanked!
Call 904-788-0682
He seemed to sense eyes behind his back.
He eventually received one proposition and angrily removed the sign.
His innovative friend received seven phone calls from very interested ladies.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Abrat4you <abrat4you(at)aol(dot)com>
I liked this one...catchy...not the normal format...very different... and clever...I think it's very hard to be clever with such a small about of words...this writer achieved their goal...and the reader was rewarded...nice work.
Alex Birch <alexbirch(at)blueyonder(dot)co(dot)uk>
Amusing little mini saga of a very resourceful friend. Its hard to say too much about 50 words but yes I liked it
Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I liked this a lot, it was inventive, original, and replete with interesting adjectives. An impressively creative use of the Mini-Saga format (with the caveat, however, that it's also the only example of that genre that I've seen so far).
RCG <rcg1574(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Interesting twist at the end. Reasonably done for such a challenging category.