This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Outtakes From Movies 1
By
Mara Maharakshasa <MaraMahaRakshasa@aol.com>
GALADRIEL: ... ere long have I yearned to have my ethereal platinum cuntcurls shampooed and styled by the clever tongue of a hobbit, with big ears to grip tightly. And for the scabbard of Enron's sword to spank my nether orbs, until they glow like Mordor's fiery furnaces...
DIRECTOR: Cut!!!!
The End
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Reviews
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Never a fan of Lord of the Rings, I have to admit this one is out of my league. I don't know whether it's funny or sad, or close to being a good imitation. Sorry, even after a friend explained it - your story doesn't do anything for me.
Anne <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
This original idea only shows us how bloopers are often better than the actual scenes. The director should have kept the film rolling on this one!
Tami <tamishy(at)webtv(dot)net>
Quite an imagination, though I must confess, I'm not sure if I understand it entirely. But, stories that leave ideas up for interpretation to the reader, are quite alluring. Nicely written.
Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Although one could produce many Mini-Saga entries in this manner, I feel it would be more effective to group a number of humorous outtakes together to form a single full-length entry. Also, I am sure the Lady of Lothlorien would like to be spanked by the Lord of Rivendell (Elrond), as opposed to a failed energy company (Enron).