This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
No Tan Lines
By
He secured her to the bondage frame hidden within the secluded garden.
He yanked down her shorts and pushed up her T-shirt, exposing her ass to the midday sun's searing heat.
"I'll be back in two hours, to add the burn from my strop to your sunburn, darling," he announced.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Tami <tamishy(at)webtv(dot)net>
Shall I say a bit vicious, cruel, maybe even down-right mean. I loved it. The title adds a nice sadistic twist as well. A wonderful snip of storyline. Leaves me wondering what happens next.
Pam <pamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
Ok, now that is mean. This sure leaves a LOT to the imagination which is good. It is stepping into an area I'm not familiar with as it goes way beyond spanking I'm thinking. It is intriguing.
Margaret <wessyLA(at)aol(dot)com>
Yipes. This sounds brutal to me, but it's well written and captures a mood in just a few words. Thank you for sending this along.
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Now this is really mean. As someone whose skin peels if he so much as looks at the sun, I can definitely sympathise. The unbridled, unmotivated nastiness has its own strength here, but I might have liked just a glimpse of why this is happening (it doesn't feel like it's for mutual pleasure). Difficult with only 50 words to play with, I realise.