This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga As you might gather, I'm a tad cranky tonight, so I let my inner child out for a whine.
It's Time for Me
By
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl@verizon.net>
"Enough about your day! Enough about them. ME!!! It's time for me!!! I had a hard day. I feel cranky. I feel lonely. It's too hot, and I hate doing work. I can't concentrate. I haven't had a spanking in FOREVER!! I--"
CRRRACK!! SMACK!! WHACK!!
"I'm sorry! Please stop!"
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
John <johnb(at)ssec(dot)wisc(dot)edu>
How quickly they change their mind. It's difficult to convey a lot in 50 words, but this author does a great pout. Makes me want to spank her myself.
Anne <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
Yes, it certainly sounds like a demon child is coming out. In a very short monologue the character portrays herself as a selfish brat! Everything is about HER, HER, HER! She certainly gets what she asks for. I liked the stylish use of punctuation!
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
The inner child seems a bit conflicted when it gets what it wants. But then, isn't like that like most of us? A fine story in a very few words.
Jodi <ladiejj(at)webtv(dot)net>
Nice rant piece. How many of us have wanted to say these things. It allows the author to bring about relateability. The end also brings some humor to it. Nice story...