This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
It's Place
By
It laid there, as if it belonged. I just stood and stared. Knees buckling, questions brewing, answers sickening. Why? I knew it didn't really matter. For in a moment I would take it's place. A simple sign, a belt laid on the back of the sofa. My fate is sealed.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Owen Williamson <ashthorn(at)maildulf(dot)com>
Good use of the tiny word limit in this. Puts us in the mood straight away. Reasonably tight, plenty of tension.
Alex Birch <alexbirch(at)blueyonder(dot)co(dot)uk>
A concise picture of what was shortly to take place well outlined within the somewhat inhibiting 50 word limit. Its difficult in such a confined limit to develop style but in this tale all the ingredients were well illustrated. Good effort.
RCG <rcg1574(at)yahoo(dot)com>
A simple story which says alot. What fate would that be? To be good from now on?
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
This successfully creates a mood of suspense, and leads the readers to ask questions and flesh the story out on their own--is "it" the belt, or something else? Why is the narrator about to get spanked?