This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Lines
By
Tasha <halfhisage@earthlink.net>
I will learn to make better use of my time, to be more efficient and succinct. 300 times. She typed it once. Select all. Copy. Paste. X 300. Send. There. Efficient enough?
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Kate <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
For so few words, this mini-saga is very evocative. One can imagine the gleeful smirk on the miscreant's face as she goes about completing (cheating?) the assigned task. It also genuinely makes me laugh out loud each time I read the last line. It would be great to see this fleshed out as a normal length story wherein the disciplinarian discovers said miscreant's mode of efficiency and, ahem, discusses it with her...in depth. Great mini-saga!
Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
"Young lady, I suppose you think that's funny, but you will soon learn that I am not amused. You have been here quite long enough to know the rules by now. I give one cane stroke for each line that is incomplete, illegible, or contains mis-spellings. And if I detect any cheating, for example use of a photocopier, carbon paper, or other inappropriate mechanical aids, then it is two cane strokes on the bare bottom for each affected line. Therefore you will now remove your skirt and panties, pull your blouse up above your waist, and bend over for the first of your six hundred strokes of the cane."
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
Elegantly bratty, and well-realized story. You found a theme that works well with minimal words. (And it's delightfully ironic that the story is about that over-blown practice of writing lines!)
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
VERY efficient - and how many times I wish I'd thought of it when those lines are torn to shreds in front of me. I'd love to see the punishment for THIS delightfully saucy tidbit!