This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Iffa Shoulda Woulda Coulda
By
If I'd have accepted my need to be spanked
I should have encouraged instead of just teased
Would have flourished across someone's knee
Coulda been happy.........Not merely Fifty.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Margaret <wessyLA(at)aol(dot)com>
Oh, this was so evocative. It touched me and it's also very nicely written. Thank you for sending it along.
Abrat4you <abrat4you(at)aol(dot)com>
This was a sad statement...cleaverly written...I got the message.
Haron <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
The story is short, but says a lot, reflecting a what if moment many of us are familiar with. Sad, and good.
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Not a story, exactly - in fact works best as a small poem, the words are so carefully chosen and resonant. The final words have a shocking and powerful kick. Very nicely done.