This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Most mini-sagas comprise 50-word stories plus a one-word title. Abel and I decided to cheat, and honoring the tradition in the Victorian novel of writing ridiculously long sub-titles, we've gone for a 50-word title and one-word story.
OK so it breaks the SSC rules and will probably get us vilified and disqualified, but do we care?
Emily: a cautionary tale in which an errant schoolgirl who has behaved disgracefully is summoned to the headmaster's study and lectured sternly before being made to adjust her clothing and bend over the back of a wooden chair to experience a severe bare bottomed caning for the very first time.
By
Abel and Kate <Ecattiva@aol.com>
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The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Margaret <wessyLA(at)aol(dot)com>
ROFL. I loved this and it reminded me of those terribly long winded novels with had to read in English Lit. Thank you for sending this along.
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
With Emily, Kate and Abel have brazenly flouted the SSC rules. And do they care? Not a bit, which is just as well in that the result is an absolutely charming story - short and sweet and cleverly put together. (Just the thing for schoolgirl fans, too.)
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Pablo's review, in which he eruditely appreciates the subtleties and nuances of the story, and also its playful inversion of the form, which has the effect of turning the story into a neat gag, as well as poking out a mischievous tongue at the contest rules: :-P~~~~~~~~~~~~
Alex Birch <alexbirch(at)blueyonder(dot)co(dot)uk>
I dont like this 50 word format much and i dont think its been given much creative impetus by the writers in this contest either but I give kate and Abel credit for total tongue in cheek anarchy. Best yet.