This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Emergency Measures
By
.........bleep......
Doesn't look good doctor.
We're losing her! Get the paddles.
Okay. Flip her easy now.
That's it! Aim dead center....
WHACK! WHACK!
.....bleep... bleep....
Once more. Harder!
WHACKKKKKKKKKKKK!
.....owwww!
Again!!
WHACKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!
....OWWWWW
Phew.......got 'er back!
Get the icepack, Nurse.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Anne <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
A delightfully funny and shocking way to bring someone back from the brink of death or desire! This concise witty piece generated a lot of giggles. My guess is that not every one has their heart in the same place!
MollyB <mollyb(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Cute. If only TV medical shows were like this . . .
Simon <srb(at)imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
This made me laugh out loud as I read it. A simple twist on the word paddles creates a hilarious little situation. The dialogue is simple but well-chosen and gives you everything you need to imagine the scene.
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
A lovely idea, which - really hard to do - fits perfectly into the tiny space. It's a very effective little visual gag. One can imagine it working as a comedy sketch in some kind of spanko comedy show. Cute, in the best senses of the word.