This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Defeat Rewarded
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His command waged war with her recalcitrant mind. Induced anxiety much worse than compliance ever would. Herded her to the brink of despair. Shuffling reluctant feet, Celine fetched the paddle. Offered it to the big, stern, kind-eyed man.
As it passed from her trembling fingers, relief washed over her at last.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Margaret <wessyLA(at)aol(dot)com>
This nicely expresses the urge that submissives have to...well...submit, even though in the short term, it's not always pleasant. Thank you for writing and sending this in.
Abrat4you <abrat4you(at)aol(dot)com>
I could feel this story...and the relief and the anticipated pain...this was well written...and both emotional...and visual...nice job!
Pam <pamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
Had to read this several times to get the full impact. But I did. I like the picture the words...so few words...painted.
Owen Williamson <ashthorn(at)maildulf(dot)com>
A neat little mini-saga, though the formatting is a little astray. I felt the first line could have been tidied up a little, too. But it made it's point in such a confined length.