This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Do Me a Favor?
By
Don't ask "What's wrong?" My agitation screams for action, not soothing.
Haul me across your sturdy legs, my friend. Rip down my pants, my panties and Spank me. Hard. Long. Red and sore.
When I'm pleading "No More!" ignore it.
Remember... you're doing me a favor.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Margaret <wessyLA(at)aol(dot)com>
Oooo, I loved this one. It illustrates the brat paradigm perfectly. Thank you for sending it along.
Jodi <ladiejj(at)webtv(dot)net>
This story has a nice vibe.. It flows.. It is well written. A piece that gives us some insight into the speaker. It also leaves us with an interesting way to think of a spanking. Nicely done...
Kate <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
This mini-saga ought to be in a greeting card. Or an opening to a chapter in a book called Everything You Ever Wanted to Know about Topping. How many times have we wanted to say this, or scream it, and not quite known how? How many times have we been frustrated by tops who just didn't get it? I love the first line, «Don't ask, 'What's wrong?' My agitation screams for action, not soothing.» best of all. Not only is this a wonderful short piece, but a public service announcement! Well done.
Owen Williamson <ashthorn(at)maildulf(dot)com>
I can well empathise with what must have gone before this tale. Well told in such a short word count.