This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga This story's setting is mid-September of 2002 at a lakeside resort cabin in the U.S.A.
Challenges
By
The Crimson Kid <CrimsnKid6@aol.com>
"Challenge," Barbara announced confidently, waving her strap. "Drop 'em, Paul dear..."
"Damn!" I downed my shorts.
"Briefs again--third time, it's thirty-six. Hands on your knees." She lowered my underpants after I bent over.
"That thong's uncomfortable, jammed up my crack..."
"I'll demonstrate real discomfort!" She swung the strap--THWACK!!
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Tami <tamishy(at)webtv(dot)net>
I am a bit embarrassed to say, I had to reread this story almost a dozen times before I got it. But after I did, I began to wonder if it would work for me. Quite clever, and in just 50 words, it doesn't seem possible. Nicely done.
Haron <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
A very appropriate way to demonstrate relativity by the means of a strap and authority. One can only wonder how much it will take for Paul to decide that the consequences of disobedience bring more discomfort than obedience does.
MollyB <mollyb(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Interesting game these people play at a lakeside resort.
RCG <rcg1574(at)yahoo(dot)com>
The word saga implies story, hence a plot. This is more disconnected than....