This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga Fifty words exactly, according to Microsoft Word. One of the shortest things I've ever written (I do mean ever! <g>)... and my first ever SSC entry.:-)
Caught!
By
Rosy B. Goode <RosyB.Goode@newsguy.com>
"Janie!"
"I didn't doooooo it, Amy did!"
"I saw you! Over the chair right now."
"Please no, not on the bare!"
"You've earned it, and you'll count them."
"But Amy did it tooooooo! It was her iDEEaaaaaa!!"
"Janie, you should know by now. it's the caught that counts."
Swish-crack!
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Pam <pamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
Grooooaannnnn Rosy!!! I think that says it all. I enjoy puns. Er, can one enjoy a pun?
Simon <srb(at)imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
A very evocative piece, making good use of the mini-saga format. Very punchy and effective dialogue with not a word wasted and really stimulating the imagination.
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Definitely a groaner, in that the gag diminishes the story somewhat, reducing what seemed a strong - albeit necessarily brief - narrative to the level of set-up for the gag itself. With a different twist at the end, it might have worked as a straight story, so the pun seems to sell it a bit short. Still, it's a good groaner.
Owen Williamson <ashthorn(at)maildulf(dot)com>
My compliments to the author - despite the dreadful pun at the end. I felt the lead-up to it could have been a little clearer, but it served to raise a smile.