This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Asking Release
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She craves the release that he brings her. Another blow, her tears begin to fall.
Her body gives into the pain. Her mind free. He feels her surrender, and yet he pushes her. He has a point to make. A lesson to remind her that she need only ask next time.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
You capture the mood here quite well, and there's clearly a lot of relationship behind the words that we see. I like this brief vignette, without all of the filler that so often comes with a story. You managed to pare a classic story line down to just a few dozen words. Good job!
John <johnb(at)ssec(dot)wisc(dot)edu>
This is almost like an Oriental poem. An inner landscape of the heart, frozen in time by the deft strokes of the scholar's brush. Oh. Did I remember to say I liked it?
Anne <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
In so few words the characterization becomes all too clear. What a rhetorical way to get what she wants. But does she get more than she desires?