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The following is a list of feedback I've received for Invid Invasion. I've pretty much just included my favorites below. I have left out names and emails to protect peoples privacy. If you'd like to leave a comment on Invid Invasion, please email me.
"I think it's pretty good! I've never heard of the Robotech/ Invid Invasion world before, but you described things well enough that I could really imagine that kind of place.
The thing that really leapt out at me is how well-written it is. It's just a step above kind've the average story, I think- it's nice to see punctuation, and there wasn't a point where I felt like anything was stereotypical, whether that be a character or a sex scene or whatever. And that's nice because one can only read about someone's "40DDs" so much without them starting to blur together. : ) Andrea is also a great heroine- believable, strong, smart, and sexy. I also have to commend you on the smooth dialogue and the interesting support characters. They're all little things that add up to a really complete, well-done fic."
"At the end of the third chapter was a great line - "She was going to force the Invid to leave Earth."
Given the fact that one Scott Bernard and a rag-tag team of irregulars were able to convince the Regent not to commit the Final Holocaust, having Andrea fight a one woman war should be quiet believable (no sarcasm here, just a shake of pity at the premise of the butchered Robotech series)."
"Hey Just waned to send you some mail, i sent you some when you first posted this story to grey archives, but found it here online. I can't beleive how big it is and how its still going full steam and incredible and erotic as the first chapter i read.... Great work my friend and can't wait to read more form you a serious fan...."
"Wow Invid Writer!
This was the first time I had seen your work, but you captured my interest. A quick look at your bio led me to start with Andrea's story at the very beginning.
You should feel justifiably proud of this vast piece of work. It is not just huge in scope but also in talent and imagination."
"...anything you write is just gold."