Digitally
"You do. Everyone does. I do."
Jul 2012
EXCELLENT X 100
Jun 2012
Thanks for writing it and sharing what there was
with us readers.
May 2012
Nice kept me hard
Well written believable
Jan 2011
iked it heaps! Really liked the cheeky factor and surprisingly the watching. Reminded me of photographic memory and u no how much I liked that one!
Jun 2010
Loved the story. Very believable, erotic and fun.
Thanks for the great read.
Sep 2009
Amazing story. I look forward to more chapters and more exciting adventures. It is amazing how you can pick something that ever teen wishes would happen to them and let them experience it through reading. Well Done!
Apr 2009
Hot, hot story. I'd love to find out what happens next.
Sep 2008
i really liked it it got me wet
GBF: I really must finish this...
Jun 2008
I thoroughly went for this, that six fingered hand certainly seemed a major attraction, seen hands with missing fingers but never with extras. Hope Mom got her happy ending too (I have decided of course she did) your story but my imagination limited thou
Jul 2006
it is such a wonderful story i love it
GBF: Great!
Jun 2006
another excellent story!
GBF: another excellent story!
Jun 2006
words cannot describe.....
gentle u sure can rite
GBF: Just because I pushed all of your buttons. :-)
Thanks. A lot.
Jun 2006
I've read all 4 parts and it was excellent. I wonder what would have happenend if Mel also jioned and stayed in the shower? I loved it. Great
GBF: That was never going to happen. :-)
Jun 2006
Great story. Enjoyed it very much. Any sequels coming up?
GBF: Well, if I can work out what to do next... :-)
May 2006
Enjoyed it!
GBF: I'm pleased!
May 2006
my kind of story
GBF: Just as well, really... :-)
May 2006
Have read several stories, very interesting. Oh, I live in Costa Rica, just to add another location to your feed back locations.
GBF: Pleased to hear it. Nice to have a reader from somewhere new.
May 2006
Wish I was Joe (the poor exvirgin)! Mel and Stella really knew what he needed and how they could play with him! Lucky guy.
With all the obvious sex in this story it was very believable and certanily FUN to read. The shower sceen was well written. You
GBF: Thanks. That's some damn good feedback!
Apr 2006
Like all your stories, this is totally absorbing, engaging and...ahem....arousing!
GBF: Oh, so you liked it? :-)
Apr 2006
Excellent Story........just what I'd expect from Gentle. I think I'll forward this link to my man....*wink*
GBF: Care to tell out what happened with that?
Apr 2006
Very good! One of the best written stories I've read! Greetings from Sweden!
GBF: They read erotica in Sweden? :-)
Apr 2006
wunnerful and fun!
Is this abandoned, or can we expect more? Please, please, whine?
Thanks -
GBF: Definitely not abandoned. Just stuck for time...
Mar 2006
Another stunner. Fantastic once more. Thank you so much.
Incidentally, I think both your prose and your dialogue is great. Erotically absolutely the best stuff I have ever read. Is there a collection online somewhere?
GBF: A collection? Isn't that where you are now? Oh, thanks!
Mar 2006
Very Good story I like the way you make it fun to read
GBF: Thanks. Pleased to assist.
Mar 2006
I read all 4 parts and loved them. Everytime I think I have read your best story I find another one equally as good. Would love a Part 5 though. Pretty, pretty please Gentle? I know I am insatiable but you like me anyway : )
GBF: Waddayamean, 'anyway'? :-)
Mar 2006
Very sweet story -- a taunting romp. It reminds me of another of your stories, The Road to Hell, for some reason ;-)
GBF: Yeah, but they're not the same. Not really.
Feb 2006
wrongly i started on 2 .will tomorrow go to 1.
your telling is astounding. thank you.
GBF: Bad, bad, bad. :-) Oh, and thanks!
Dec 2005
What a wonderful beginning to a good sex life as *****. I love sex, you love sex, and WE ALL LOVE SEX.
GBF: You keep trying to give the story away. :-)
Dec 2005
Mel is one crazy young *** a very sexy story.
GBF: Sorry to bleep you.
Dec 2005
A great start to a hopefully very sexy story. Very believable and well written.
GBF: You stopped here? :-)
Dec 2005
v good
GBF: v thankful
Dec 2005
Loved the story. This is the first one of yours I have read. Thanks for sharing!
GBF: Thanks for reading!
Nov 2005
Absolutely great...I think the dialogue is the best ever.
Where do you come up with these ideas for stories?
GBF: It's all in my warped mind...
Nov 2005
I think that you are just about the 'fucking'
best erotic writer on the web. If you can top this piece of 'fucking' erotica', then good 'fucking' luck.
I'm not afraid of that word..actually it sounds good although it's not always appropriate in 'polit
GBF: What's with all the fucking language then? See, no editing. :-)
Nov 2005
Gee, now that I know you're archiving everything I say under the grandiose title of "Reviews," I gotta think of something to say that's more articulate than "Great story."
Nah, I don't actually. Great story. Looking forward to more.
GBF: Hey, I'm happy with that! More than. Thanks.
Oct 2005
Great story that needs another chapter like in threesome.
GBF: Thanks
Oct 2005
WOW! This has got to be one of the most sensual stories I have ever read. I just cant wait for more.
GBF: I really gotta...
Oct 2005
damn
GBF: you can say 'fuck' if you want!
Oct 2005
More! More! MORE!
"nuff said"
GBF: Damn! Yeah, must get back to that! :-)
Sep 2005
well done!
GBF: Well responded!
Sep 2005
I love your story Digitally and hope to see more chapters coming soon.
*snip*
Well no matter what my idear's are keep on writing the story your way and I will keep on enjoying it.I hope to be reading all your stories soon as I just found your site
GBF: Thanks a whole lot. Sorry to snip your lengthy feedback.
Sep 2005
Great part to this story. Glad to see *****. Maybe she will *****. (hint, hint)
GBF: Yeah, and maybe not! :-)
Sep 2005
excellent it made me really horny !
GBF: Oh my God, I better remove it! :-)
Sep 2005
good work gbf I like cheerful and sexy.
GBF: Me too!
Aug 2005
Woweee! Your writing never fails to impress, it's all so darned awesome, like, 6 fingers, that strikes me as entirely random, but it fits the story and...works. Btw, why did Melissa change to Melanie?
GBF: Thanks. Yeah, I know... I just can't decide which way to fix it. :-)
Aug 2005
Part 4 did not disappoint. I can see why some might think it slow. And if this is the end of it then it was much too slow.
GBF: Well thanks. This is NOT the end...
Aug 2005
Well, well, WELL!! Gosh - 4 hole chapters of fun, frolic and [gasp] dialogue.
I can tell that you have more than a bit of experience of 'Clean sex' with all your shower scenes..
Actually, I like the story - a lot. You 'dun good' ;-))
However, I
GBF: Damn twists! :-)
Oh, you mean 'hole' or 'whole' huh? :-)
Aug 2005
This is really sweet and erotic as H3ll! I dont know how you do it... it's an excellent mixture of Nice and Naughty and Sweet and Sexy. You are a very gifted writer, Gentle!
GBF: Hell, you can say Hell. Fuck, you can even say fuck, if you want. :-)
Aug 2005
I can't believe you wrote a part 4! Thank you! They're getting better and better for every part - Digitally is the best story I've ever read. I've gotten much pleasure from reading them.. You know of course that now you just have to write more parts.. :)
GBF: Why thank you. I wish you'd left an email address with such stunning feedback.
Aug 2005
I'm reading Digitally, all parts, haven't read 4 yet.
It's the kind of character driven writing that gets me going whether or not it's erotic.
I think I know these people.
So far it's a 10.
GBF: Pleased you like it so far!
Aug 2005
I liked it. Telling him to leave the door unlocked was so obvious.. but the twist was nice.
Aug 2005
At the risk of repeating myself, I *really* want to be Joe. I'm pretty sure no one has ever said to me "please fuck me now." I think I'll put that on the list of things I want to happen before I die.
As always, an outstanding effort!
GBF: Thanks. I'll send someone over to whisper in your ear!
Aug 2005
DAMN
GBF: :-)
Aug 2005
NICE, THAT SHIT GOT ME CUMMIN HALFWAY INTO THE STORY NICE JOB
GBF: Yeah, well even after an orgasm, you should be able to operate the caps lock! :-)
Aug 2005
By the way, I just finished your digitally series and I was very amazed, don't know which is my favorite story but I do know it was one of the best!!!!
GBF: Shucks, thank you.
Aug 2005
Your shower scene made me so sweaty that I need one now!
GBF: Well go on then!
Aug 2005
Take this for all four parts: very good!
This one you could turn into one of those repeating serials if you wanted to; the kind with twenty-five chapters in book one.
Of course, to keep things interesting you'd really have to push the plot as far as
GBF: Thanks. 25? Are you insane? :-) I thought I WAS pushing. :-)
Aug 2005
now you are cooking
good re-write and hot hot hot
GBF: What re-write?
Aug 2005
Another really outstanding story, well-told, excellent descriptions.
GBF: Thanks very much
Aug 2005
[insert ultra-positive superlativeS here]
i.e. I can't say enough good things about this tale.
sigh... MY youth didn't get wild until I wasn't a youth, and then for only a brief time.
...ah, but the memories...
But I'm into another of my whipl
GBF: next, and next, and... Hold on. :-)
Aug 2005
nice story, fun
Aug 2005
Proofreading.. oh.. *blinks and grins* I was too busy enjoying the story.
it's fantastic.
GBF: Thanks. I stole your comment!
Aug 2005
no editing required for perfection ;)
GBF: :-)
Aug 2005
The Part 2 was, well "shitty". I almost didn't proceed, Part 3 was much better - not good enough for a solo masturbation but for a M/F warm up - quite good.
GBF: Hmmm... I get a lot of good feedback on Part 2. Sorry you feel that way, but I'm pleased you liked this more.
Aug 2005
Great story... I truely love the plot and the characters ; ) Thanks for taking the time to write.. As far as ideas for next chapters... I hope Lenny falls off a bridge ;) hahaha...
Anyways... great story and great writing.
GBF: Oh, poor Lenny. :-)
Aug 2005
Grateful that there is a place in the world where such tender and precious moments can be discussed. Even if in fiction.
GBF: Thanks. A lot.
Aug 2005
This was wonderful! First sex makes terrific stories, and your storytelling is so good, I was infatuated with Stella as well! Your work is always far above the tawdry tales which make up most of the body of erotic fiction.
GBF: mmmm... Stella. Oh, sorry, what were you saying? Thanks.
Jul 2005
I think it's a great story and moves along at the right pace for me. The only problem I have with it is there's not enough of it. I need several more chapters to put it to good use even though I only have five fingers.
GBF: Well, there will be. Just hang on.... Actually, there already is one more chapter there.
Jul 2005
Loved it; funny and very clevr
GBF: Just the effect I was after!
Jun 2005
I read all of "Digitally" just now and it's instantly my all-time favorite of yours!!!
After reading this I find it HIGHLY unfair that your rating system only goes to "10"!
GBF: Oh, *blush*. Thanks.
Jun 2005
Joe,Mel, Cuz Stella and the gang at the diner are all so real, this could be the diner in the neighborhood where I grew up. I know these guys.... Thanks for a great story. Rob
GBF: Thanks Rob. Could you please tell me what to do next then? :-)
May 2005
Wow and whoa. I like your imagination! Very sexy, and I'm not just talking about the story but the swimsuit too.. you write very well.
GBF: Thanks. Why do the best comments come in without email addresses? :-)
May 2005
What can I say the more I read the more I like. I hope that you don't ever stop! You have a great gift!
GBF: Well, thanks. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I've been thinking about part 4...
May 2005
will there be anymore chapters to this story, Digitally?
GBF: Yep. I just need to find some time...
May 2005
This was both romantic (which I love!) and original, simply the biggest turnon ever! You have to write another sequel, please!!
GBF: I HAVE to write a sequel, and you don't even tell me who you are? :-)
May 2005
please add more and some incest
GBF: More, yes. Incest, noooooooo!
Apr 2005
I guess i'm harrassing you today. Digitally does deserve to go further
GBF: You can harrass me like this as much as you like!
Mar 2005
I think a gang of boys should take the mother of thier friend and keep her for a number of days constantly raping her and doing other things against her will.
Then she needs to go back to them all finding she needs her new found perversion.
GBF: Now that just shows me what's wrong with some readers of erotica. I'm certainly not writing any rape stories, thanks just the same.
Mar 2005
even this story isnt finished i still love it, it is sweet, and a lil funny at the same time.
GBF: That sounds like you! :-)
Mar 2005
Tell me there is a part 4. Pleaseeeeeeeee!!
GBF: Well, there is in my head...
Mar 2005
fucking hell, te best wak i've had in a while i can tell you
GBF: Well, you could have stopped, to type! :-) and thanks.
Mar 2005
lovely easy reading, always wondering where it will go
GBF: You're not the only one!
Feb 2005
I liked it quite a bit...but I like ertoica with just a bit more description of the bodily interactions, touching, sensations. Still, I thought it was very good and would Love to read the next chapter should you write one!
GBF: Don't be so apologetic for having an opinion. Thanks for sharing it!
There will be a next part, promise.
Feb 2005
Joe was a little clueless but overall excellent.
GBF: Only a little... And it's not over yet!
Feb 2005
Very erotic. I could tell it was British style but damn good.
GBF: hold on, hold on.... Firstly, thanks. Secondly, British? I think not. Thirdly, what do you mean 'but'? What's wrong with British writing?
Feb 2005
Wow.... can anybody tell me where parts 4 and 5 are ????
I'm sure they must be somewhere *grinnnnnnnnn*
Nice stories :-) keep them writing and posting :-)
Though i also like rougher stuff....your stories are like sunbathing after a long enjoyable s
GBF: Thanks. Parts beyond 3 are still in my head, mostly.
Plop down a towel, and get some sun!
Jan 2005
Oh, fantastic...just fantastic...I think I now have a new fantasy! I loved the story development; I think this may just be the deepest story I've read in a long time, even if I did have to sit through three chapters--it was most certainly worth it, and I
GBF: Thanks. Actually, it's not finished...
Jan 2005
Good job ending each part properly. Each stands alone, but you know there will be more. And that's really all I can say without sounding like a fanboy. Too many places where I could just remember one quote, and not need any other erotica for a week! B
GBF: I'm not sure anyone else has tried to read all my work in one sitting! :-)
Jan 2005
Great! Very...inspiring!
GBF: Oh oh. What exactly does it inspire you to do!!
Jan 2005
This is the one I was thinking of when you were trying to get my permission to quote me. Hope you continue this, soon, because I was really enjoying this one. Well, except for the mother who'd say the foul words and talk about teen-embarrassing topics l
GBF: Ah, I wondered. I'm trying to get back to it...
Dec 2004
so far its a good story - I'm looking forward to the whole series gt update
Dec 2004
Great job! I had a stiffy in my shorts!
GBF: What another one! :-)
Dec 2004
anyhow nice one yet again.
GBF: Thanks.
Dec 2004
This is a superb story.
GBF: Thanks. I must finish it...
Nov 2004
great update
Nov 2004
I have really enjoyed this story so far. Since I enjoy older woman stories I was hoping something would happen between Joe & Mel, even it was only a handjob. Thanks for the writing effort.
GBF: Only? Waddaya mean, only? :-)
Nov 2004
Reaonably erotic and sensuous. I could imagine it a little hotter if she sat next to him in the booth and had him jerk off while she sat there with her hand on his thigh or perhaps cupping his crotch. Or even just had her hand around his shoulder, perha
GBF: Oh, well, to me, the separation was the whole point. He made up for it in part 3, anyway.
Nov 2004
great story line
Nov 2004
Have to clean up first!
GBF: This a 'girl' clean up, or a 'boy' clean up? So many questions...
Nov 2004
Great writing and a lovely story
Nov 2004
The stud with 6 fingers! A seduction that sucks you into all 3 parts easily. Its fun, a gentle read with some good, albeit anticipated sex in part 3. Keep this one going, there should be more here as Joe still has a lot to learn......
Oct 2004
I thought the story was really really good.
It flowed along and kept me gripped to the very end.
Thank you. I hope there will be more episodes
GBF: Gripped? :-)
Oct 2004
God, don't tell me that's it. There's got to be more. Please keep going.
GBF: There's more. Promise. Stella hasn't finished with him yet!
Oct 2004
WOW,what a story! My friend ***** sent this to me,thinking i might like it....fuck i loved it!
Cant wait for you to finish it.......I dont think i have been thid fucking hot in a very long time,hell,gota call one of my boyfriends over,damm maybe ill ca
Oct 2004
are there more chapters to digitally? or is three the limit.
very good story and i've been waiting impatiently for the next chapter. then the thought occured to me, OMG,what if theres no more? tell me,i have to know the truth!
don :)
GBF: Oh, there's more. Joe has more to deal with yet, and hell, just once with Stella wouldn't be enough, would it?
Oct 2004
Thanks a lot. Several hoots
GBF: Hoots?
Oct 2004
Kinda long,but nice reading.
Keep up the good work.
GBF: Long? I've only just started.
Oct 2004
WOW as always a hot collection of 3
keep up the great work
GBF: Thanks
Oct 2004
No, it doesn't work.
Now if she'd sat next to him and let him to the work (and work on him) that would've .... worked for me a leeetle bit better.
The pencil on the floor routine is pretty ridiculous.
GBF: Can't win 'em all. Sorry I had to snip some...
Oct 2004
Well done, as always. You certainly have a command of conversation, even ones as odd and disjointed as those in diners with waitresses. (and I might add, you're spot on. *G*)
GBF: Oh, thanks
Oct 2004
that was fuckin awsome. were they anthro characters? all i know is wow that made me horney lol nice job.
Oct 2004
You rascal! You are stunningly clever and, somehow, you know people inside and out - appropriate for a writer of pornographic material, I suppose. You've earned an easy ten.
GBF: Pornographic? Waddaya mean? This is erotica. It says on the front page. Porn has a lot more fucking! :-)
Oct 2004
you started the story so tender and nicely and now in my opinion you ruined it by just going the same path most other stories go.
GBF: Sorry you feel that way. It seems others don't agree though.
Oct 2004
nice stiry well wrote.
Oct 2004
You write beautifully, with a great understanding of the cadence of natural speech. I'm not sure about the whole extra finger, business, but I want to read more, so I suppose that's a compliment.
GBF: I hope you read the other chapters then!
Oct 2004
Hmm. Yum. ::licks chops appreciatively, wriggles around in chair a bit::.
Nice. Good writing. Good dialogue. Lovely description of the beauteous Stella. Lucky Joe, that rat-bastard, he doesn't deserve to be so lucky. Good for 'im.
Fun read.
GBF: Oh, poor guy. Piles, is it? 8-)
Oct 2004
Woo-woo! MARVELOUS dialogue, funny and sexy at the same time. Wish _I'd_ had a friend like Mel, it would have done me a world of good at the right time.
GBF: Wait until part 3. He meets Stella then...
Oct 2004
Thanks you found the time to continue the story.
Oct 2004
Digitally part 3 is great. The combination of Mel and Stella teasing Joe is a lot of fun. And the sex was very well written - hot and believable. The characters are interesting and fun, and Joe has the same sorts of issues in dealing with girls that we al
Oct 2004
excellent characterisation, nice dialogue tempo, sassy women, and HOT SEX . . .
GODS! this should be screenwritten!?
I,d pay money to see this story on the screen.
next installment please
Oct 2004
Gentle I hope you have a Mel, Stella, and Mum in your life...
Another well crafted story with human characters that are easy to relate too... The storyline is vivid and exciting without being lurid... This story has a very pleasant combination of comfo
Oct 2004
Great story, you handle the conversations well, The sex seems too just fit.
Can't wait for 4
Oct 2004
On a more positive note, I hadn't read any of the chapters to Digitally, so read all three of them at one sitting. I found it interesting and promising, and will continue to read the installments as you produce them.
I give it (all three chapters) a 7
Oct 2004
great interplay between all the characters, looking forward to the next part.
Oct 2004
I love the description of Stella - a small, tight and freckled body has to be one of the hottest concepts round.
Oct 2004
I vaguely remember back then...when I first began to learn about sex...how easy it was to be embarrassed...by a girl -- or worse -- by my mother. I thought no one knew I jacked off. Buuuut also, the good feeling when a girl paid attention. This take
Oct 2004
Just read "Digitally" and enjoyed it. Dialogue is excellent. It's jumbled enough to feel real, like many of our conversations in life. My initial reaction as I was reading it was a little frustration, trying to figure out where this story is going, but
Oct 2004
Loved the three parts of "Digitally". I have always liked your style - no rush, and as your name suggests, gentle and gentlemanly.
Oct 2004
Smart, snappy dialogue, well written
Oct 2004
suspense building, now on to Part 3.
Oct 2004
That was good. Please keep up the good work and the great stories!
For some reason, I'd bypassed "Digitally" so far. Well, it makes great reading for a lonely saturday night.
Oct 2004
The story keeps getting better. It is well written and especially well edited which I really appreciate.
Thank you.
Oct 2004
THIS IS SO HOT!
Oct 2004
Damn, this is a great story!
I am enjoying it greatly, but am feeling like the broken record - I've said that every time I have read one of your stories!
Thanks!
GBF: Thanks. It's nicer, from my perspective, than if you were saying 'you really suck' every time, so don't fret.
Oct 2004
Great story. sexy and funny with great inerplay betweent the chsrscters, especiall Mel and Stella with their blatent sexual overtones had Joe all confused, but it worked for him in the end with that lovely love scene. Nice ending.
Good humor and nice sex
GBF: Ending....??
Oct 2004
Great! Really like the repartee, and *very* pleased that it's so literate! Keep up the good work - looking forward to more!
Oct 2004
It's your choice, but I'm looking forward to reading any further chapters, whatever else you decide to do with Joe, Mel, Stella, and the rest.
Oct 2004
Oh my God, this is a hot story thus far. I don't know why it's getting such low rates because this is some first class writing. I like you let the dialog speak and form the pictures.
GBF: Sorry to snip some out.
Oct 2004
This is an excellent start.
I think you should fustrate the kid now for awhile. Give him a glimpse, then make it so the oportunity doesn't present itself for a couple of weeks, but with hearty amount of teasing sprinkled in. Build up the anticipation.
GBF: Start? Hell, I thought I was nearly finished!
Oct 2004
Well written or you have a good editor. You've intertwined well the US/UK vocabulary & slangs.
I'm looking forward to a long & entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.
Oct 2004
Well, Gentle, that series is simply a wet dream. Good
heavens <*fanning himself*>! Shall I begin the chant?
Part IV, part IV ...
GBF: Part 3 nearly killed me. Of course it wasn't too bad for Joe...
Sep 2004
Brillant, just loved the dialogue.
Funny,witty, and very humorous.
Does this come naturally or do you
have to work at it. Fine job.
And now, on to part 2.
GBF: It's hard work, but it's the part I love the best.
Sep 2004
I'm back. Just finished part 2 and liked it as much as part 1. I don't know where you're going with this one, but I'm sure I'll enjoy it as much as the first two. The humor and the dialogue are(is) wonderful.
GBF: I don't know where I'm going either!
Sep 2004
loved this story, i had some like experiences growing up, got caught many times and promised to do anything for them not to tell, had many good times because of 'getting caught'
Sep 2004
Your stories get even better because they are funny, imaginative and have some kinky elements like (friendly) exhib and embarrasment which create a suspense. I also like your language. I hope you will write phonebooks full of your stories.
GBF: Thanks. Phone books?
Aug 2004
I like it .. .kinky as it is!
GBF: Kinky? This ain't kinky. You wanna get out more!
Jul 2004
great story like to see you finish it
GBF: You mean it's not finished? Oh yeah.
Jul 2004
I LIKE THE STORY A LOT AND I WOULDN'T DO ANY MORE WITH IT,BUT THATS ME
Jul 2004
Great stories ... Wow
Jul 2004
Super! When will we see Part 3? Look within for the details...
Jul 2004
Part I & II were very good. Really hope you will continue soon. Thanks for your work.
GBF: Thanks. I intend to.
Jun 2004
Amazing!!!!
Jun 2004
Good story is there a sequel ???
GBF: Yeah, of course there is:
Digitally Part 2
Jun 2004
It's getting very hot all of a sudden!
May 2004
fuckin great.. got me going... or cumming... real quick... more of the same please
May 2004
I need to read more, but 8 on a scale of 10 is a good start.
May 2004
Can hardly wait for subsequent chapters. It's really hot! Thanks.
Sep 2003
I wait with bated breath (note 'bated' no way can I 'hold it'! hehehe)
Sep 2003
Chapter 2 of Digitally was great! I'm really looking forward to more.
Sep 2003
Hey mate, Loved ya story, can't wait for more!!!
Sep 2003
I don't know what those other idiot voters were thinking. I gave you a 10, because it's a good story. Keep it going, and I hope your score rises (at least as much as Joseph's dick!). LOLOL!!!!!
Sep 2003
This is a nice first chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Aug 2003
Continue! surprise us.
Aug 2003
Good to see something longer from you. You seem to be the master of the short stuff these days and it is very good. I wouldn't pretend to offer plot advice...just no 120 chapter tomes about some kid and his adventures playing soccer ok?
GBF: Soccer? And hey, I need plot advice, the same as the next guy.