Together
Rissa lifted her ass a little, and hoisted her nightie up again, before carefully pulling her panties down her legs and pushing them off with her feet.
Oct 2013
I can still enjoy a good crossover story like this one. :-)
Jun 2013
I really enjoyed Together.
Dec 2010
a super story... The resolution was exellent and the ending?? Just right, with the possibility of another series hanging there as well.
GBF: Not *much* chance. :-)
Nov 2010
Really great writing do it again and THANK YOU
Jun 2010
Together is actually very nice and sweet.
Jun 2010
I really liked the slow startup and the scattered but meaningfull little shared exsperiences.
Jun 2010
Very well written. I am also a writer and enjoy well written erotica. It is a fine line between erotica and porn and you really write very well!
Jan 2010
Two in a row, I don't know how to tell you just how much I like your writing. The subject matter and the descriptions are just right for my tastes.
What adds to the enjoyment is grammer, punctuation and spelling.
Jan 2010
A nice soft sexy story.
Aug 2009
Well! It seemed like it could really happen. I did this with others when I was in my teens.
Actually seems natural. Of course I don't know what follows this. The innocence is very stimulating. I'm anticipating what's to follow.
May 2009
I thought it was a great story. Especially the voice of the piece. Although I see you've written other stories, this is the first I've read so far - but certainly not the last!
May 2009
Gentle, you are just like very fine wine. You just get better & better with age......This was sooooooooooo good, and so real.
Apr 2009
Ah, fond memories! Relive the emotion... Another great story from my favourite writer
Mar 2009
well you got me - guess making it through 3 chapters 1st isn't too bad though :-)
Mar 2009
very sexy - i have a lot of willpower on occassion but you are testing me!
Mar 2009
very sweet and sexy - wish i'd been there! - i would type more but i'm slow w/my left hand only :-)
Feb 2009
very nice story! Well done
Feb 2009
It was fantastic!
Dec 2008
Just came across this story. Fantastic! I need to read the rest... keep writing, you tell a great story.
Keep it up.
Nov 2008
Makes me jealous, and want to have the same feelings as a woman.
Nov 2008
I had this experience once, only it was with my ex-wife and a male friend of hers. It was very exciting.
Oct 2008
This is one of my favorites of yours. Somehow sweet and written in a way that lets me lose myself in the characters. Thank you.
Jun 2008
Just wanted to say I really enjoyed your stories
Jun 2008
Smashing!
Jun 2008
Nice website. Well done.
I enjoy your stories, so I'd like to see you keep on writing.
Jun 2008
Gentle, I really enjoyed this, the dialogue between Jamie and Rissa in chapter one was very well done.
I loved the contrast as they matured, how you sketched their characters in.
Jun 2008
A completely different style for you...I had no idea where this was going (although a bit of G-G was probably inevitable), but you tied it all together extremely well and the sex was handled nicely. Was exciting in a controlled way, if you know what I mea
Jun 2008
This one is exciting and long enough that a person can get into a certain... state. : ) Lovely. Gotta admit that the ending came crashing in unexpectedly but that does seem to be your style. LOL But you've got to admit that there is more to the story
Jun 2008
WOW !
Jun 2008
oh wow
i finally had the time to read this
it is amazing. amazingly wonderful, and i say this full well knowing all the other stories of yours that i've read and loved.
you've outdone yourself. again.
you should be published, in print
Jun 2008
So having read
> some, but not yet all of your works, I wanted to sent my thanks for
> both your efforts but also the attitude and love which you've
> conveyed.
Jun 2008
I loved the first chapter and know from the past the rest will be excellent.
Jun 2008
I haven't had a chance to read this one yet but i'm SOOOOOO EXCITED!!!!!!!
Jun 2008
That was nice. I rather like happy endings. And happy middles.
;-)
Jun 2008
Another coming of age tale.
Loved it!!
Jun 2008
Your nom de plume is exceedingly obscure. In a way it seems you might be some sort of control freak. But somehow I doubt that.
However, your stories are just fine, snd from those I've read, show no viciousness or anger.
That's nice.
Jun 2008
Okay, here's what i think.
I just finished reading the story and i found it really sexy and adventurous.
Ooh yes, it did get me wet. :-)
Jun 2008
OK, I read it, at first I wondered where it was going,I am not usually into girl on girl I leave that to the boys, but I persevered. I liked Max, he was a perfect fit. Seems it was worth the effort you put into it !!
Jun 2008
What a beautiful story. I live to hear about two girls pleasing each other. This is one of your best.