The Game
Wearing only a shirt and a bra, I dropped to my knees in the entranceway. I spread my knees on the hardwood floor, and reached down between my sopping thighs with both hands.
The Game - Part 1 - Opening Gambit - Nov 05
The Game - Part 2 - How To Play - Nov 05
The Game - Part 3 - Taking your turn - Dec 05
The Game - Part 4 - Risks - Dec 05
The Game - Part 5 - Closure - Dec 05
Jul 2013
Sweet. Your writing has more twists than a
licorice stick.
Apr 2013
Too short not embarassing enough not realistic
Apr 2013
Good story. Keep it up.
Apr 2013
pleasantly surprised. a refreshing change from most of the erotic drivel i've stumbled upon lately.
Aug 2012
I loved the story. All 5 parts.
Aug 2012
Didn't see that coming & I frequently do elsewhere. Nicely done,thank you so much for that!
Jul 2012
i m soooooo horny
Jul 2012
Thought it mwas excellent. A very good story, a little humour, nicely done sex, mysterious, making one read further to find out what is happening to her.
Overall, a really nice change from all the hard sexual stories mostly full of unlikely happenings.
Jul 2012
really hot
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Jun 2012
Super !! i was talking to the wife about how you can so well do girl talk scenes. They're so realistic.
May 2010
OUTSTANDING! A minimum of setup and catching me immediately into the story.
May 2010
Sort of spooky, but Good! I can't wait to read more.
May 2010
Wow! That was pretty great!
Jan 2010
very nice, sexy
Jan 2010
lovely
Jan 2010
Cant believe that the game has only had 7 people vote on it. What a great little story.
Jan 2010
Wonderful story! I really enjoyed the show anonymity aspect and the relationship between Annie and Heather. Thanks so much for sharing!
Nov 2008
Very good story! I loved it.. I'm going to have to share it with my bf and see what he thinks!
Nov 2008
pretty good game it was.. i somehow guessed it was ***** before the end but it still was an enjoyable romp :)
Oct 2008
Picked the game up through your blog and I throughly enjoyed it. I was able to read it at one siting. And once started I had to read the whole story without stopping. As they say "Good Show"
Apr 2008
Delightful.
Jun 2006
I just read chapter 5 of The Game (Posted on Literotica). I loved it. I really like a good romance. Will there be more?
Cant wait to see what you write next!
GBF: Sorry, but no. The fat lady has sung!
Jun 2006
Wow, great opening. I like the idea of a game, trying to think, figure out what the game is. Have any thought about The Game movie with Michael Douglas when inventing this? Or did this really happen?
GBF: Nope, in both cases. Did you read the rest?
May 2006
This multi-part story if very sensual. It is obvious that Heather is both excited and pleasured by her unkown attacker. She is an extremely adventerous coed - too much for her own good! I do believe that she is more excited by the dares of her lover th
GBF: Sensual is good! :-)
Apr 2006
I love your stories but this one is high on the list of favorites. I love the way you detail the best parts and honestly, it ended perfectly.
GBF: Thanks for that. It's the endings that worry me...
Mar 2006
I think it was great and you must have enjoyed writing it
GBF: Oh, I did. I did!
Feb 2006
LOL..what a grin. Great story.
GBF: Yours, mine, or hers?
Feb 2006
ohg! so freaking sexy! i have a question about 'birch'? but i will read on! just know that i am hooked!
GBF: Hooked is good!
Feb 2006
"Oh, but the... wow."
'sall I can say.
GBF: That's good! :-)
Feb 2006
You should try to get published, you're so talented. Very sensitive. I'll read all of you :-) A 10 for sure for The Game, all 5 parts.
GBF: Gee, thanks. I better keep writing. :-)
Feb 2006
Terrific! I love the affection, teasing and the unexpectedness of it all. Well done - what a talent you have.
Max
GBF: Thanks Max. Hope you stick around and read some more.
Feb 2006
Wow, now THAT was a twist at the end of the tale. ... but apart from that an excellent tale, well told, gripping, sensual, stimulating ...
Thanks!
GBF: I had to bleep out part of your comment so you didn't give it away!
Feb 2006
Gawd, I wish I could meet a girl so easily turned-on as Heather! A little anticipation, a little risk, a kiss on the ankle...
Chapter 5 here I come!
GBF: You mean they don't do that for you? Heather is special. :-)
Feb 2006
Mmmmm, curious how the game is almost abandoned in this chapter ... except for that one little note. So clever. But Heather is a very unusual girl if she can just get on with life so easily given her experiences of the past couple of days!
GBF: Almost, but not quite...
Feb 2006
Good, although a slightly more detailed description of the skirt would have been useful. That aside, a brilliant development of The Game and I'm intrigued to find out where it goes next. But that'll be for another day - I'd like to savour ... dream ... fa
GBF: The skirt looks exactly as you imagine it does.
Feb 2006
Unbelievable!!! This is some of the best erotic writing I've ever read and I can't wait to read the remaining chapters ... the suspense is superb! Thanks.
GBF: Pleased it's working...
Jan 2006
Awesome!! Can't wait to read more of your stories!!!
GBF: Well, there are plenty there to choose from!
Jan 2006
amazing work keep at it and enjoy doing it
GBF: Gee, thanks. I'll do my best!
Jan 2006
Great story A plus for you!!
Jan 2006
Many twists and turns, but the journey was great fun...and very wet! Luv and I vote for ***** forever, in Part 6.
GBF: I kinda thought you might!
Jan 2006
hey i read from like part 2 i think its a great story it gripped me from where i started till the end of course stopping to tidy myself up every now an again lol anyway i hope u write some more stuff like this
GBF: More? :-)
Jan 2006
I have seen you write better
GBF: Damn!
Well, if you'd left your address, we could at least discuss it.
:-(
Jan 2006
Very good.
I didn't see it coming but in retrospect all the clues were there.
Very very well done
GBF: Not all of them, surely. :-)
Dec 2005
Great serial! My GF & I read it and we were amused. But I have to say my hunch was right on track. The clue is in the details ;) Is another serialized story in the horizon perhaps? Or is that too much to ask? =D
GBF: It's too much. :-)
Dec 2005
Gentle.........it was superb. Terrific plot, well told, meticulous diction and structure. You must be an English Major. Sexy as hell and massively arousing.....really really good. You could be crafting a novel, carrying that lobg plot line.
GBF: Thanks for everything you said, including the bits I couldn't fit in here! :-)
Dec 2005
That was definately a surpise ending. Very well done, and well worth the effort.. I know it made me come back, again and again. *grins*
Dec 2005
O my goodness, good ass ending, I liked that surpise ending.
GBF: You mean good 'as'? :-)
Dec 2005
Oh, my god! Perfect ending. Thank you. I think they keep having ***** every once in a while.
GBF: Would you?
Dec 2005
I wrote to you previously, in connection with the swap, to tell you how much I enjoyed the writing and how sexy I thought the story was. I did enjoy the story, although my favorite remains The Swap.
Congratulations on another fine bit of writing.
GBF: Hey, thanks a lot. If you'd told me who you were, I could write back to you again!
Dec 2005
Amazing! i am soaking over the excitement of the story... Gentle, I can tell that a lot of work went into that one, you are truly the master of romance. I wish I find a friend like that one day.
GBF: Well, so long as you tell me the story!
Dec 2005
I hope that you will continue to bring us the going on in the life of Heather.
GBF: No, no. It's finished!
Dec 2005
super! Nice twist at the end.
GBF: Thanks.
Dec 2005
Where do I sign up for a friend like *that*? lol I loved it!
GBF: Damn, I was hoping you could tell me!
Dec 2005
I love your work!
GBF: I love your feeback.
Dec 2005
It gave me chills. Thanks for a wonderful ride. I can't believe you were worried it was one of your best stories ever.
GBF: Shucks, thanks.
Dec 2005
like these stories a lot! where can I get to see the photos?
GBF: You need a camera.
Dec 2005
OMG! wow. that was ... unexpected to say the least! but it was really very good!
GBF: :-)
Dec 2005
I haven't read your story until now because I don't like waiting week to week for chapters.
I read it and loved it. I mean, what's not to love about *****? I thought the whole premise was pretty neat, the exhibitionism was hot and the descriptions of
GBF: You mean I missed out on the other four parts of feedback? :-)
Dec 2005
I am stunned. And I thought ll along *****.
The story was told so well, with just the right amount of tension.
Thanks again for a really great story.
GBF: I wish I could post the rest of what you said! :-)
Dec 2005
Gemtle, this whole series was just wonderful. Very well versed I thought and love the interaction between *****. And then the surprise that ***** was Birch...was just wonderfully sexy. A super story and Thank You so very much for your extremely dedicat
GBF: Sorry about the bleeps.
Dec 2005
On purpose I did not read any of the reviews. I wanted to see if I could figure out who Birch was. Nor do I want to give the ending away for any other reader. The overall story was terrific and kept me in suspense. I did not guess the identity of Birc
GBF: Thanks. The comments are usually safe to read. I try not to let anyone give it away.
Dec 2005
Had to wait and reread the 5th chapter. The story was outstanding. The ending was a shocker. I couldn't believe it. As I said, I had to reread the 5th chapter. I was totally expecting *****! Great job. Keep them cumming!
GBF: Glad to have caught you!
Dec 2005
Oh, nicely done! I had a hunch about who it was, but I never expected THAT to happen! YUM!!! :-)
GBF: :-)
Dec 2005
A different spin. and certainly a surprise.
GBF: Good, good, good... :-)
Dec 2005
That was a surprise ending and a half! Awesomeness! I absolutely *LOVE* the whole series. I am definately downloading this one so that when I get lonely... well you get the picture.
GBF: Gotcha!
Dec 2005
it would have been better if *****. the ***** bit was a bit harsh, and the ***** was a bit much. if there was *****, and *****, it woulda been better and less challanged my unbelief.
GBF: You could have just said you didn't like it, you know.
Dec 2005
Excellent! Wonderful!!
GBF: Thanks. I'll leave it like that!
Dec 2005
I LOVE it just like parts 1 - 4. Absolutely amazing. I wish I were in a position to be able to take care of my reaction to this story.
GBF: What position would that be? :-)
Dec 2005
Excellent story, and most unexpected ending. More please!
GBF: Have you seen my list of stories? :-)
Dec 2005
Wonderful story! Very different.
GBF: Very? :-)
Dec 2005
No need for nervousness at all :) That was a fun story to read, thanks for writing it. (And yes. I waited until chapter 5 was finished, since I don't much like having to wait. Impatient bugger here. Hehe.)
Thanks :)
GBF: Whew
Dec 2005
This is the perfect ending for the story. You have outdone yourself. In my eyes this is the best you have written so far. Keep making stories like that and you get published i hope.
GBF: Perfect? I have my doubts, but I'm very pleased you like it.
Dec 2005
So many stories with SURPRISE ENDINGS are really fraudulent, revealing something at the end that almost any IN PERSON observer would have known from the beginning. This surprise is not only HONEST, but stunning because...
GBF: Had to bleep the spoiler...
Dec 2005
Oh, that was lovely. I did suspect *****, but nonetheless it was well done. A nice story, sexy but ultimately safe and wholesome, which is not an especially easy line to walk.
GBF: Thanks for the kind words. Sorry for the bleeps
Dec 2005
Would never have guessed it was *****. You kept your cards very close to your chest on that topic!
Great story, liked it a lot. Wish SOL had let me vote it a 10 but the voting routine never showed up
GBF: I think if you've voted on it during the chapters, then you can't do it again. Not sure though.
Dec 2005
You did a first rate job with this. It is exceptional! Thank you for sharing your story with us.
GBF: Many thanks.
Dec 2005
I still want it to be *****. The ending was anti-climactic.
GBF: Sorry to hear that.
Dec 2005
Ahhh, surprise ending!.. But I really like hard cocks, fat ones =)
GBF: Not THAT surprising.
Dec 2005
No need to be nervous! Very well done. There is so much schlock here that to see quality work is a bright spot in the day. Yours was a shining beacon. Thanks.
GBF: I'm sure what I can say. Thanks!
Dec 2005
I think it is great, and sexy, and I liked it.
GBF: Three for three!
Dec 2005
Please continue I have enjoyed this story very much
GBF: Will do. Thanks.
Dec 2005
Now this right here was sexy, hot. Still trying to find out who the hell Birch is but o well. I guess I'll have to wait to part 5. PLEASE HURRY!!!
GBF: Well, it's written, but you have to wait untilt he weekend.
Dec 2005
Now this right here is very good. It kinda leaves questions an stuff like that. But it's sexy, hot an all that stuff. I'm so turned on at the moment. I have to read the rest now.
GBF: It is? Thank goodness!
Dec 2005
Very fun story, being back memories. It's still a good part but not really all that good as part one, but it was still good, like I said.
GBF: What kind of memories, huh?
Dec 2005
This part of the story is kinda interesting. You kno it's hot, got me a lil turned on. I'll have to read the rest now.
GBF: That was, after all, the whole idea!
Dec 2005
The picture portrayal of a college campus is excellent. The story fits the background and is exciting. What more could one ask for. Thanks for sharing.
GBF: That's a lucky fluke. :-)
Dec 2005
Better. Quite tenderly erotic, if you know what I mean. Will this series gradually escalate to more bizarre sexual games?
GBF: It won't gradually anything. Only one part to go!
Dec 2005
First of all that is a very exciting story that you tell. It is well written. I really like the way you show her feelings and the way they shift in the story.
Again, I would have enjoyed the story even more if Birch had turned out to be another woman. Th
GBF: It's not over yet!
Dec 2005
You are keeping the story interesting and not giving away any answers. Keep it up.
GBF: Not for much longer. Only one to go!
Dec 2005
I love the fact that you've taken us so far without revealing Birch's identity! This story, it's like leisurely sex on a Sunday afternoon - it's just building, and building, and building... I don't know how much longer I can wait for the climax!
GBF: I'm not going to comment!
Dec 2005
Fan-damn-fucking-tastic! Getting better and better, though I gotta wonder about the self-control of a guy who obviously could ***** but holds back. Good story. Looking forward to the "climax".
GBF: Yeah, one to go! I'm excited too! :-)
Dec 2005
Tsk. I'm disappointed. I was hoping for a good hard bite or two. :)
Still a good story, though.
GBF: You can't have everything. I'm a romantic, remember?
Dec 2005
This had to be exciting to any woman that read it.
GBF: Just women? What did I do wrong?
Dec 2005
I'm wating to vote. We the reader need to know who Birch is pretty soon. I hope it is someone she can build a life with. I'm waiting to vote.
GBF: Only one part to go. Next weekend all will be revealed.
Dec 2005
the anticipation is awsome. How could the 'game' get any better? Because I love cunilingus so much, I wish the description was more explict; but then maybe my imagination as to the actual is stronger. Anyway, I just quaked as she lay awaiting.........the
GBF: MORE explicit? :-)
Dec 2005
What an awesome story. I fantasize that I am Birch. Not harmful but sexy and in charge. Please continue the adventure!
GBF: You could be in for a shock. :-)
Dec 2005
I LOVE it! It's great.
GBF: Ah, but will you like the next part?
Dec 2005
This was most interesting. It really made me hard while reading about the drama and suspense she must have felt wile *****. It is well written and keeps me aroused waiting for something to happen. The fact that she was ***** was exciting, daring and very
GBF: Thanks. Sorry to bleep your comment, but it gave too much away.
Dec 2005
Like isn't the word. It's like someone slowly undressing and seducing me. Intensely sexy.
GBF: Lemme get the light. :-)
Dec 2005
*drip, drip, drip,* Keep writing, for the love of all that's holy! Please! I am going to need to download this whole thing and print it out- Damn, Gentle, publish it! It is worth that.
GBF: You just gained a friend for life!
Dec 2005
YES!!!!!!!!!!!
GBF: :-)
Dec 2005
Hey Gentle..........very good story. Heather is almost as bold as Meg. I like that. Sexy.....horny......in a most delightful way. All us fellers should have a female so delightfully endowed with horny genes. Well written too.
GBF: You just might be allowed to hang around here a bit longer! :-)
Dec 2005
Well...ummm...not bad. Erotic setting; dialog enhances the staccato effect of her decisions to have sex. Fairly straightforward, however. Not especially riveting.
GBF: Can't win 'em all, Cap'n!
Dec 2005
I love this series. This reminds me of my floor last semester. To me this is probably the best you have ever written. And if you ever come across a girl like that, give her my email :)
GBF: I'm keeping her all for myself!
Dec 2005
Incredibly teasing! In a good way though! Liked it.=)
Dec 2005
Sometimes the chemistry is just there. "Carpe Diem"
GBF: But it wasn't on the carpet. :-)
Dec 2005
By comparison, this chapter is rather quiet, indeed it is much to the liking of this HOPELESS ROMANTIC! :-)
GBF: Great
Dec 2005
Games are fun.
GBF: Just as well. Thanks.
Dec 2005
Excellent story...very hot. Love the "take-charge" attitude of a girl who knows what she wants, and gets it. My interest is piqued and I'm looking forward to the next segment
GBF: I thought you might like that one...
Dec 2005
Very well written little sex story that leaves the reader still wondering who Birch is. Waiting unpatiently for part IV.
GBF: Hey, less of the 'little' :-)
Dec 2005
Over halfway? Darn!
GBF: :-)
Dec 2005
Fun
GBF: brief.
Dec 2005
*giggle* and yes....Birch is definitely *****. As for Heather......I'd have done this...
GBF: Sorry about the bleeps. Didn't want to give the story away.
Dec 2005
And to think even after a dip in the pool, your stories still make a girl very wet. Don't stop. ;)
GBF: Well, I'm motivated now. :-)
Dec 2005
And BTW I loved the next chapter
GBF: whew
Dec 2005
Great story
GBF: Thanks.
Dec 2005
Mike could have been something of interest. Will she go back to him when the game is over or has he been all that he is going to be ... other than a good close friend.
GBF: You want to know NOW?
Dec 2005
Great story! I can't wait for the next
installment.
Thanks!
GBF: I hope you're not alone! :-)
Dec 2005
I just LOVE this story. I've loved parts one and two and part three is even better.
Dec 2005
Fab. Very well written. high quality. Loving it.
GBF: Thanks. Hope you enjoy the rest.
Dec 2005
This story is so interesting. It gets right into this girl's mind and does interesting things with it.
Thank you, I am eager for more.
GBF: I'm sure you'll like the next one!
Dec 2005
Yes, I'm thoroughly intrigued with this Birch person.
Dec 2005
It's top ten stuff.
GBF: Thanks.
Dec 2005
Verrah sexah, my man. I like that, it certainly leaves questions ... and that, in and of itself, lends to some very interesting sexual questions. Hehe. I like the way you left it open ended
GBF: They will be answered, you know. Just not yet!
Dec 2005
Brief, but intense.
GBF: No one has time, you see...
Dec 2005
This a really erotic story Not over the top and so real Ive played those games with girls just keep it real no one really goes too far all at once Its just gentle steps
GBF: You have???
Dec 2005
"The game" seems interesting. I only read part 1, and I hope you focused on the mind game.
GBF: Couldn't say. You'd have to read some more...
Nov 2005
Kinda makes you wanna get in the game. Keep up the great writing.
GBF: You wanna play? Let me check with Heather. :-)
Nov 2005
I don't know kid. It was a little scary for me but damn it turned me on. I never thought of anything like that but it would be unique to say the least.
GBF: Kid? Hardly. You like? Good.
Nov 2005
Hey, :-) this is neat. You really are good......Thanks......P...
GBF: Thanks.
Nov 2005
Makes man't wait to read the rest.
GBF: Good!
Nov 2005
Nice beginning; I'm looking forward to the rest.
GBF: This isn't the beginning. :-)
Nov 2005
I wish my college days were like hers!
GBF: Don't we all!
Nov 2005
LOVE IT
GBF: GREAT!
Nov 2005
It is going along nicely and is very intriguing. Can not wait for part 3.
GBF: Thanks.
Nov 2005
"This is NOT my cup of tea," I complained a little bit too loudly as the story tightened its grip on my balls! ;-)
GBF: Well then, you shouldn't read the rest when I post it. :-)
Nov 2005
I have just found the time to read the second chapter of The Game, I once again must say that this story is going to be a favourite for me and I will look forward to the next chapter.
I got a feeling that young Heather is going to get into deeper water
GBF: Well, *something* has to happen!
Nov 2005
This is beginning to push all my buttons. Very naughty, very sexy. Very well done. :)
GBF: Pleased to hear it.
Nov 2005
Still a good, intriguing story but it doesn't seem to carry the same impact as part 1. Still ... 'tis always nice to run into a lass whose skirt can't cover her ass as she skipe up a stairway!!! Are you sure we have to wait a week for Part 3?
GBF: Damn, I liked this part much better. :-) Yeah, of course you have to wait!
Nov 2005
That is a fun story and I liked the way she approached The Game. It is really a nice game with a lot of warmth that is portrayed. I loved the story and am looking forward to more.
GBF: Thanks.
Nov 2005
In the words of Oliver Twist,"Please, Sir, can I have some more?" ;D
GBF: More? Next week. :-)
Nov 2005
Another interesting chapter ... I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story is going to end up.
GBF: I'm pleased about that!
Nov 2005
A bit tame, doncha think?
GBF: No, actually.
Nov 2005
Not quite what I was expecting, not your normal work, but I think your just building the tension for the next chapter...
Even though it was somewhat boring, I know the rest will be totally erotic...
Hope you don't mind the critism but you did say yo
GBF: Damn! Anyone else bored yet? :-(
Nov 2005
Wow.
GBF: Thanks.
Nov 2005
Very interesting idea, quite a bit beyond anything I've ever had to do. I'm interested in what will happen next, and how it has all been done.
I will be disappointed if there is no closure to this tale. Please don't leave me hanging.
GBF: There will certainly be closure. It's all written already.
Nov 2005
I can't wait for the balance of the story. These sort of dominance stories really get to me and yours, so far, is really good!!
Keep it up.
GBF: Dominance? Hey, it's just a game. :-)
Nov 2005
Rrrowl, very sexy. I like it quite much ^.^ It was sexy and arousing.
GBF: My God, how did that happen? :-)
Nov 2005
Like it? YES... Love it? More and More!
GBF: Hooray!
Nov 2005
Funny how so many people just think of sexy clothing as affecting other people, when in all actuality the person most affected is often the wearer. Thanks Gentle, ch. 2 is every bit as good as ch. 1 - and ch. 1 was YUMMY.
GBF: Yummy is workable...
Nov 2005
Good storyline and very straightforward.I love it
GBF: I hope you keep up with the rest, then. :-)
You love it, and you give me a 5?
Nov 2005
it ws good but where is the next one?
GBF: A day or so away...
Nov 2005
OK, you've got me hooked! Reel me in and give me more!
GBF: Soon. Very soon. :-)
Nov 2005
OH, YES!
Let the good times roll ...
You are off to a good start.
GBF: Whew. :-)
Nov 2005
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GBF: :-)
Nov 2005
The solo performance was most arousing. Encore!
GBF: Thanks. Thought you might like that.
Nov 2005
Can't wait to find out the game. I got really turned on by the excitement and the threat and then the I'm ok. Good story
GBF: That's you hooked then! :-)
Nov 2005
I loved it. If the rest of the story is as good as the first chapter, it will be great.
GBF: Oh, oh. Pressure!
Nov 2005
That is DAMNED sexy Gentle, I am intrigued now to see where this one will go. :)
GBF: Just what I hoped for!
Nov 2005
Once again the dialogue is the key, astounding!!!!
GBF: Thanks a lot.
Nov 2005
Very good. But you can improve on it.
GBF: Oh, you think?
Nov 2005
IT'S VERY VERY GOOD.
GBF: Is that why you are shouting? :-) Thanks!
Nov 2005
Gave it a 10 ...
Can't wait to see what happens next to this interesting character ... who is a bit more than she appears to be; yes? :)
GBF: You can't? She is?
Nov 2005
interesting, keep going
GBF: Thanks. I will.
Nov 2005
My god what a great start. This is damned sexy already and has my curiosity as to what the game will entail. Post the rest and quickly, please.
GBF: No rush. :-)
Nov 2005
Gentile "The Game-part 1" is off to a hot start. Obviously there is to be a part 2-5. I am very interested in what is to follow! Give you a 10 for the start.
GBF: It's 'Gentle'. :-)
Nov 2005
Awesome start...brought back memories of a girl that I knew...
GBF: That can't be bad!
Nov 2005
Oh my stars,... and there are 4 more parts?
We are most alive when we are feeling our 'edges'. And this is VERY edgy. *gleaming grin*
Anticipation is also an erotic sensation..... *slow smile*
GBF: Well, hope it lasts. :-)
Nov 2005
Very well written. I think the dialog works well in this one...nice balance with the descriptions.
Wonderful images generated...you do write well, Gentle!
GBF: Thanks!
Nov 2005
wow good so far cant wait for chapter 2,wow
GBF: Oh, good!
Nov 2005
"The Game" sounds exciting and I look forward to
more...9.83 after only six votes may not intidate anything, but it must say "loud and clear" that at least five others agree this is above average.
Post Faster...faster...faster! More!!!
GBF: Speed isn't everything. But thanks a lot!
Nov 2005
Hope the Game continues......like the theme..fear IS a powerful aphrodisiac (sp) and she seems to need them....both fear and sex......
GBF: Oh, it will continue...
Nov 2005
Very intriguing... makes me want to go out and find someone who has the guts and imagination to write something like that. Of course, that would mean I'd have to follow through on that myself, though... Hehehe
GBF: You hitting on me? :-)
Nov 2005
Oooooh, I like! Very intriguing...and definitely sexy!
GBF: All three of those work for me. Thanks.
Nov 2005
REally Hot!! Would like to have been there.
GBF: I'll organise something. :-)
Nov 2005
I think that this story is off to a great start. I hope that you, indeed, have more chapters in your imagination. I'm not too fond of violence, preferring the psychologic domination and its ramifications.
GBF: Lots of big words. Glad you like it.
Nov 2005
Very hot, in an intense, scary sort of way. Intriguing that the person knows so much about her but she has no clue as to his identity.
GBF: Just what I was looking for!
Nov 2005
Gawd. Incredibly hot. Not for anyone in the audience who's ever been abused or raped, though.
Believability, about zero -- once you ...
GBF: Well, so far they react like Heather. So there. :-)
Nov 2005
I enjoyed the first chapter and look forward to reading the next.
GBF: That's a relief. :-)
Nov 2005
OH man, a sequel, NOW!!!!
GBF: I like your attitude. No! :-)
Nov 2005
Excellent opening. Now I'm really anticipating the next chapter to see just what The Game really is. Sure you don't want to speed up the postings?
GBF: Ha! I learned this trick from Batman. Cliffhangers are good! :-)
Nov 2005
Just a general comment about your site. Could you post some hint of what the stories contain. Maybe the standard categories everyone else uses. I have no interest in reading a lot of the stories on the sites. Your "list" does not offer a clue, so I rare
GBF: Not sure quite what you mean. My list has all the codes listed down the left hand side.
Nov 2005
Oh yes!
Nov 2005
Like it? yes.... love it? not yet.
Nov 2005
It's...interesting. I think I do, but I'm waiting to see where it goes.
Nov 2005
YES!!!!
Nov 2005
I was surprised, not your normal "style" but dang that was hot! If I wasn't sitting in the library right now...
GBF: How appropriate!
Nov 2005
I like everything but the knife, and as far as the knife goes I'm beginning to not care.
GBF: Hey, if it didn't make you nervous, what would be the point?