69s

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Hand strokes cock, as mind strokes Cindy. Cock and Cindy erupt together, tissues catching my pulsating guilt.

MF

 

You know about 69s, right?

No, not those ones. Well, kind of, I guess.

69s are erotic stories of less than, or preferably exactly sixty nine words. A short-short. A flasher's flash, so to speak.

I don't think anyone takes these things seriously, but they are a lot of fun. Well, except for the almost inevitable trimming...

So... The Tunnel

I approach the tunnel with trepidation, anticipation.

Finally entering the dark dampness, I feel bigger, stronger, pushing as hard as I am able.

The synergy between the walls and myself excite us both, the heat rising, the pulse racing, the strength convulsing me, the constriction claustrophobic.

As I near the end, the elation explodes in me, and I erupt back into the daylight.

Just another drive to the office.

or... Imprisoned Penis

I have a large black penis imprisoned in my barn.

At night, after everyone is asleep, I slink out in my nightgown and have my way with it. My wetness is impaled on its rigidity, and I weep with joy, as we jointly erupt.

It runs away afterwards with its owner, returning every night on the off-chance of a reunion.

I'm no longer certain who the real prisoner is.

Finally... Despite the heat

Despite the heat, I'm hidden completely under the bedclothes, cock in one hand, tissues in the other.

My mind alternates between two things: Not getting caught, and Cindy Smith from history class. Down by the river on the cool green grass. Naked. Horny. Hot.

Hand strokes cock, as mind strokes Cindy. Cock and Cindy erupt together, tissues catching my pulsating guilt.

Brother opens the door just late enough.

Tramp put her considerable talent to this one...

Personal Touch

I wake needing release. My finger slips inside me, finding my warm liquid nectar. I spread the heat, and my legs. My fingers work quickly, fluttering up and down, pressing in all the right places. Need turns to liquid, liquid turns to heat, heat turns to contraction. I gasp and roll into his arms, my head tucked under his chin, my hunger sated. I hear him whisper, "My turn."

So, you got something for me? :-)

Oh, look, I have a submission from 'Dirty Thoughts':

The water flows down my body, my fingers following in it's path, trailing over my breasts rubbing circles over them, moving lower down across my stomach. My fingertips lightly caressing the soft skin. Even lower to my pussy, lightly touching my labia, stroking up and down finding my wet centre. My fingers find my clit and start rubbing it gently, faster now, until my climax washes over me.

And another from 'Beau.Hemian':

A thousand times in words. Now reality. No lines left to cross. Lips pressed are familiar. Eagerness. Emotions charged, but still there's grace. Her: wet, very. Him: hard, very. Hikes up her skirt. Her world on offer. Pulls her close. Gently crash, dive in, together. Flesh enveloped. Hearts clamour. Already close. Slow then building. Fluid motion. Fast to come. Dream come true.

"Next time 69?"

"Yes" she grinned

Perfect.

Feedback

Recent feedback

Feb 2012
What I love about these stories that they get to the point (!) so quickly just like those which describe love trysts that take up to twenty minutes from touch to tremble. See that's only 31 words!

Jan 2010
Great litlte pieces. Very good imagery.

Jun 2009
quick thinking warm and tender shorties.Very lickable, sorry,likeable

Jan 2009
Of course I enjoyed your work. All of it as a matter of fact. You are a wonderful writer with an exciting way with words

Sep 2008
Yes, we all know 69 !!!!!

Apr 2008
This was a fun quick read.

Mar 2008
Nice little shorts, much like how the Japanese trim down an idea to fit it in a haiku...

Apr 2006
I like the form, even as short as it is, because it allows you to really play with metaphor and reminds you of little love notes you might leave for a favorite lover when you have to leave earlier than expected or desired. A short flutter of the hand can
      GBF: You're quite the poet, aren't you? :-)

Mar 2006
bit plane jane i could do better my self im good at making up stories
      GBF: Come on then.

Mar 2006
Waiting Breath, hard and fast. Body surging and churning with need. Liquid pooled between my legs, liquid pooled in my eyes. Tension building as I ache for you, beg for you. I wait for what only you can give me. Wanting and needing more than w
      GBF: That's very good! Not my style at ALL, but good.

Mar 2006
Very well done. The Tunnel was my favorite. Liked the ending.
      GBF: Thanks. So you got one for me?

Jan 2006
love 'em
      GBF: Love you!

Nov 2005
69s is both a sexual and a author's chalange. Gentile, you done good! But not that good. 69 words are not enough for describing anything, especially a 69! Its like trying to eat a Thanksgiving dinner in 10 minutes with both hands tied behind your back
      GBF: So... Do you have to carve the turkey too? :-)

Nov 2005
These are really and truly neat. I have often done or felt like some of the essays.
      GBF: Some? :-)

Nov 2005
Have I got something for you? Yeah, a 10! Again. Best wishes
      GBF: Woohoo! Thanks.

Nov 2005
Very stimulating! I love longer stories, but this works, too.
      GBF: Great. And shorter means I get to write more of them.

Nov 2005
Ohhh...I love a challenge!
      GBF: I think I knew that. :-)

Nov 2005
These were good. I can see the challenge in the 69-word limit, and your images were nice. I am _very_ impressed by Tramp's "Personal Touch". That is just wonderful!!
      GBF: Damn, I know I shouldn't have let her out to play. :-)

Nov 2005
Great idea and very well done. I don't know if I'd be able to keep it at 69 words, though. I tend to run off at the key board. :-)
      GBF: Well, it wasn't my idea, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Nov 2005
This is a totally different 69 than I'm used to, but in a good way. My favorite story was the first one, and even though this didn't make me as wet as some of you other stories I still thought they were enjoyable.
      GBF: You know, it's this stuff that makes it all worthwhile. Thanks. :-)

Nov 2005
nicely creative! your stories have been too ordinary lately so nice mixing it up
      GBF: Ordinary? :-)