This is the outdoors-lover who teased me until I pushed her on onto the hood of a Porsche, lifted her skirt and found she wore no panties. She planned it, and I made sure her efforts weren't wasted.

This is the tramp who first got my attention by stuffing her pink panties in my pocket. When I got home, I found they had her phone number written across the bum. She later confirmed that she didn't write it herself. She said volunteers were everywhere.

This is the horny girl, playing innocent, who couldn't make it to the carpark from the bar, and begged me to take her against a tree, dropping her jeans to assist.

This is the slut who said my friends were boring, and delivered beer, half way through our poker games, stark naked, twice.

This is the devil who insisted on dressing up for Halloween, and then answered the door in her underwear. Red panties with a horned devil on the crotch. Just that.

This is the horny trollop who introduced me to her old friend and former lover, Diane, in our bed, and then made one of my fantasies come true. All weekend.

This is the girl with the voice who phoned me at the office to tell me she wanted me to come home, right then. When I couldn't, she told me she just wouldn't wait any longer, and didn't, but stayed on the phone.

This is the girl who bought a new coat, and then stood in the kitchen at home, in a maid's outfit, with a wooden paddle, to apologise. She insisted I punish her. Five times she had to be punished for that coat.

This is the show-off who took me swimming, and didn't tell me until we got there. Her striptease alone was worth the trip. I wasn't the only one who thought so, but I got to take her home.

This is the artist who wrote me a four page email, describing how she likes to masturbate when I'm not there. She enclosed photographs, in case I was confused.

This is the girl who unzipped my jeans under the table in a restaurant, and stroked my cock. I wouldn't have stopped her except my mother kept looking at me to see what was wrong with me.

This is the angel who abstained from orgasms for two weeks, to prove that she could, but gave me a handjob every other night. The same girl who woke me at four the next morning, rubbing herself frantically and claiming she couldn't wait any longer, just before pleading with me to help, in case she only managed one or two orgasms. I lost count somewhere around five. Yeah, both. Five orgasms, five AM.

This is the hussy who pressed the "stop" button in the casino elevator and gave me a blow job in full view of the security camera. And a standing ovation.

This is the outdoors-lover who teased me until I pushed her on onto the hood of a Porsche, lifted her skirt and found she wore no panties. She planned it, and I made sure her efforts weren't wasted.

This is the sports fan who made a bet that she could distract me while I was watching football. I told her that buying a vibrator was cheating. I never did see the end of the game.

And now, somehow, this is the girl who is spooned in front of me in our bed, naked and soft, warm and sleepy, her dark hair sprawling over our pillows.

I can't see her eyes, but I know they glitter wetly, mirrors of her happiness.

She pushes slightly towards me as I climb in, welcoming me to share the space with her, grabs my hand and kisses it silently, more love than lust, a welcome from the heart, not just the groin.

After kissing my hand, she gently places it on her breast, kneading it herself a little, letting me feel the nipple stand up and pay attention.

My other hand gently strokes the back of her neck, and over the slope of her shoulders, a caress really, not intended to arouse, more to affirm. It doesn't work that way though, as she shivers.

My body closes in behind hers, and I can feel her smooth warm skin all along mine, her hot little butt nestling in against my slowly hardening cock. She can feel it, and giggles quietly, before rocking a little, and then readjusting herself so it fits against her, fitting nicely in the space between her buttocks, hard now, and pointing straight up.

My hands wander carelessly over her body, 'accidentally' brushing over her nipples a few times, stroking her front and back at the same time, my hands on her face as she takes a finger into her mouth, my fingertips massaging her scalp before returning to the lower parts of her body.

I can tell by the position of her arms that her hands are exploring as well, but her own body, not mine. I love it when she does this. She would have made a point of letting me see in the past, but this time it's almost subconscious.

Her fingertips travel their meandering way down her stomach, over her navel and further south, stopping to massage her pubic hair a little, cupping the mound in her hands and sliding fingers down either side, deep in the creases at the top of her legs, down to the base of her labia. They don't stay there long.

As I peek over her body I can see her slowly start to drag her fingertips back up, in between the damp labia, slowly parting them, and sliding up to, and beyond her clitoris, jumping a little with the quick contact.

It's the first time of many, as her fingers return again and again, the skin becoming more slippery each time, until she can slide her fingers the full length quite effortlessly, and does.

Her body starts to move against the fingers, and her butt rocks against the underside of my erection. It seems that she suddenly realises it's available and her body moves up a little against mine. She lifts her leg, allowing my cock to pop through the gap and sit just at the entrance, so close that I can feel her fingers as they slide back and forth.

She extends her strokes now, her slippery fingers slowly coating my cock, with the whole thing happening like a dream; as though we could take a week or a lifetime to finish this, which in a way we can.

A little more manoeuvring brings the head of my cock to the entrance, and I can just feel the skin of the labia against the bulb of it, hot and slippery, but oh so nice against my most sensitive part. Her fingers keep touching me as well, slippery tips on and over my cock, fearlessly caressing and encouraging.

I wriggle a bit more, push slightly, and slide up the lubricated labia a little, and back again, listening delightedly to the sighs from her mouth, and feeling the undulation of her skin.

Pushing again, I'm a little surprised. She has spread her labia with her hands, needing me inside. I slide between the folds of skin, feeling her fingers on either side of my erection, and the heat inside her. The head of my cock feels more constricted; the familiar tightness almost frictionless, wonderful.

We both move a little, repositioning to get comfortable, and then she resumes her rocking. Her fingers wander a little further now; clutching my testicles between her legs; stroking fingertips up my shaft to where it disappears inside her; continuing up to caress her clit again.

A rhythm arises of its own accord, and as I resume caressing other parts of her body, she moves very gently in front of me, many points of contact between our bodies, her butt against my stomach, her back on my nipples, the back of her legs sliding back and forth on the front of mine.

Most of my attention though is taken by the movement around my cock. I can feel her rhythm become a little more energetic, her hands leaving her groin from time to time, to suck her fingers, tweak her nipples, knead her breasts.

I'm conscious, for the first time ever, of a need to be gentle, to not thrust so vigorously, to allow her to decide the rhythm. I find that I like it, and lose myself in the movements, our bodies flowing smoothly together, not in need of an orgasm so much as wanting the contact.

The physical drive can't be ignored though, and her fingers return to her clit, rubbing against the movement of our bodies, as she pumps steadily on my shaft, pressure from inside and out, a slow but inevitable journey.

I allow her to make all the decisions, just going along for the ride, and stepping up the pace whenever she does. I can feel my cock much more specifically than usual, feel the different parts of it rubbing wonderfully inside her, feel her muscles jump as I touch her in different places, as the pressure of her fingers bring her nearer to her goal.

As she gets close, she decides that she doesn't want to finish this herself, and takes her hands away from between her legs, instead grabbing mine, and holding them to her breasts, showing me how to caress and then knead them, ignoring and then paying full attention to her hard nipples as her bottom crushes against me and pulls away, again and again, faster and faster.

I can tell when she is nearly there, and gently remove my hands from her grasp, pulling them back behind her body, and sliding them both down her spine, and further, over her buttocks. Her fingers continue their attentions to her breasts, and her thighs keep moving before me. As my fingertips slide down the valley between her buttocks, sliding gently over the puckered opening, it's all she can take.

Her body clamps up in what must be the most gentle orgasm I've ever seen her manage, and as she sighs loudly, I give up on holding back, and release my load deep inside her, my cock pumping as her muscles clamp down on it, and our machine-like movement dies down, and finally stops.

I am exhausted, and elated. I can tell she is too, and without saying a word I snuggle close in behind her, my cock softening inside her, knowing that I've been gentle enough, that we've been careful enough; that we have, for the first time, taken care of our tiny little baby.

Jun 2012
A forever favorite. This one always makes me slightly weepy, just as I finish...

Jun 2012
What a beautiful little story. I love the contrasts and the cute ending. Wonderful!

Jul 2008
I especially liked the intro and the finale. Very different from Three Little Pigs. But each in their own way is very good.

Mar 2008
Excellent!

Mar 2008
'Wild sex in the working class after five, it's a gas! Wild sex in the working class! Government's gonna get there first if I don't get home fast...' (Oingo Boingo)

Jan 2008
Beauty!

Jul 2006
Wow!!

Jun 2006
I'm still in shock about the wooden paddle! That has big the biggest surprise at all from you. :) What a woman.
      GBF: Oh, hush. :-)

Apr 2006
This is the 5th time I have read this and each time I am more impressed with the description of the nameless "tramp" who makes a great lover for a nameless male. From the description of his feelings, it is obvious that "he" really loves "her". She is th
      GBF: You know, you really gotta leave an email address. Please. :-)

Apr 2006
I've read this story probably 30 times. By far, this is my favorite. I've shared it with many and I tell them all the same, "This just makes me melt." Love it, hun. ^^
      GBF: You know, there's a place for people like you, around here. Thanks a lot.

Apr 2006
I've left a comment for this story once before. I believe it read: "Love this story SO much!" It's still very, very true. Reading it again, it was even better. Still sweet, kinked, soft, wild, gentle, naughty, sensuous, and erotic. This beautifully
      GBF: This is one STUNNING piece of feedback. I'm not sure what to say! Thank you!

Mar 2006
Nice and romantic,yet,still salacious.Quite nice.
      GBF: Salacious isn't a word you hear much these days...

Mar 2006
Read this yeaterday afternoon, thinking is perfectly described my current partner. She thought so too when I read it to her last night. I'm most appreciative ;). Beautifully sweet.
      GBF: I should charge!

Mar 2006
This is the first story I "accidently" left open on the browser for my wife to find later while I was away... Two thumbs up.
      GBF: ... And? What happened??? Oh, and thanks. Very much.

Mar 2006
The first part of the story made me wistful that MY girl doesn't think to do those things...then shifts abruptly to this wonderful, gentle, sensuous, wonderful creature who makes love like a mother (and I mean that to embody tender, passion). Great sty
      GBF: Awww, shucks. Thanks. Much appreciated.

Jan 2006
This stories are about love? with beautiful intimacy. Make me sad. I am missing out.
      GBF: Hey, you're not alone!

Jan 2006
I LOOVVVEEDDD THIS STORY! At first I was like what the heck is this? Then as it slowly came together it wasn't just a story about sex it was a story about making love, and I wish I would be made love to like THAT!
      GBF: I'm very pleased you liked it.

Nov 2005
Awww thats really sweet. I enjoyed this story very much, the lead up was fantastic, full steam ahead like a train as you describe her, then sensuously mellowing out as they sleepily make love.
      GBF: You're a writer? :-)

Nov 2005
This is the way I want a man to describe me.....and make love to me. I loved it!!!!
      GBF: Great!

Nov 2005
wow. nice!
      GBF: Wow. Good!

Nov 2005
I enjoyed this story but the last line throws me.
      GBF: I'll email you.

Nov 2005
Hmmmm...well, it was a rather delicious read. It began, to me, with that double-standard-edge of-the-Madonna/Whore-tinge, but then cascaded beautifully into a lustful mutuality of tantilizing risque sexual escapades, and then beyond that, both were ensna
      GBF: Wow! Maybe YOU are the girl. Do you write?

Oct 2005
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      GBF: Oh, come on. Yeah, a 1 is okay. But an anonymous 1, with no comment? That's hardly playing fair, is it now?

Oct 2005
Oh god, that was so incredible. I came at least twice just reading it; and I'm at work. Only suggestion; make them longer and oh god, keep writing.
      GBF: Oh, suddenly it's all worthwhile. :-)

Oct 2005
Hi GentleBut Firm, What a well thought out story. Loved it!
      GBF: Thanks.

Oct 2005
well written and well detailed.
      GBF: Thanks.

Oct 2005
So sexy, and the ending. A surprise.
      GBF: Shouldn't you expect that, from me?

Oct 2005
It was OK but not a top ten by this author. Just not an area of intereste. Thank you for the posting of this story. There will always be some that my not interest me but I am sure the younger readers will enjoy.
      GBF: Hey it's in MY top 10! :-)

Oct 2005
wow.. it's sensual.. but tasteful too thank you
      GBF: Not at all. Thank YOU!

Oct 2005
Wonderful!!!!
      GBF: Oh, thank you!

Oct 2005
Love this story SO much!
      GBF: Love this feedback SO much more! Wish you'd left an email address.

Oct 2005
mmm and another thought provoking and inspired writing, grins as i think of love making like this mmmmm ohh yessss grins well ya got a 10 from Me!!!!
      GBF: You know what? You can hang around here any time.

Oct 2005
Excellent!
      GBF: Thanks. Makes up for the previous one. :-)

Oct 2005
This is fantastic...kind of reminds me of a young girl I once had a relatinship with. The feelings were there but time and age were against us. I've never forgotten her and she still remembers that special time. Thanks
      GBF: Thanks.

Oct 2005
Actually, it's a nine and a half. A really good story.
      GBF: You know, I really should set this database up better. :-)

Oct 2005
This is a story with a unique style and action This is a rhythmic grabbing like a contraction This is a delicious tender sting in the tail This is a genius writer with a beautiful tale So youre probably wondering so why not a ten? Well I would have but t
      GBF: Wow, thank you VERY much!

Oct 2005
Interesting format, but it never really pull me in.
      GBF: Oh well, you can't win 'em all.

Oct 2005
Nice, the calming down of a very naughty girl. All the best girls are very naughty. :)
      GBF: Waddaya mean, calm?

Oct 2005
This hitherto undisclosed detail caught me by such surprise that I feel like I had been somehow cheated. :-(
      GBF: And yet, you give it a nine. In fact, this is the whole POINT of the story.

Oct 2005
Score - fav. I only wish I were that girl for some guy! Here's to eternal hope :)
      GBF: Now just last week some guy was telling me he'd like to meet that girl. You peeps wanna hook up? :-)

Oct 2005
OK, I've read your stories before, and I've read a lot of others. This piece is incredible probably the best I have ever seen online. The composition and imagery are wonderful. Vic
      GBF: Yeah, but you didn't leave an email address, so now I can't interrogate you as to WHY you think that. Thanks for the kind words.

Sep 2005
Loved it, Loved the girl, quite a slut, but she gets what she wants in all cases...God could I use someone like her right this minute
      GBF: Oh, I would never class her as a slut. Nope.

Sep 2005
The one can't be allowed to stay at the top. That's just people being retarded. Oh, and the anonymous 9 must have been refering to this: "What were you reading then? I hope it wasn't rude! :-)". Anyway, that was the definition of Astounding.
      GBF: First, thanks. Second, retarded? Yeah, alright :-) Third, oh, yeah, I guess that was it. Fourth, thanks. Again.

Sep 2005
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      GBF: I really hate this. No comment, almost no score, no balls.

Sep 2005
So erotic. You can visualize and imagine. How sexily and beautifully written .
      GBF: Gee, thanks a lot. Here, read more. :-)

Sep 2005
Oh no, not rude at all, in fact, very naughtlie nice,,,:o)
      GBF: I'm not sure what you mean, but I like it! :-)

Sep 2005
Very Nice!!!
      GBF: Thanks. So are you!

Sep 2005
Beautiful! First the shear lust that drives so many outrageous actions, then the love and gentleness that comes from the ultimate culmination of that lust. Great story!
      GBF: Thanks. You want to take over? :-)

Sep 2005
Aww, this one is really good. So sweet, this might be one of the best I have read for you.
      GBF: I've got you worked out now! :-)

Sep 2005
Excellent! I love the rhythm of it.
      GBF: Sex is like that. :-)

Sep 2005
I really like it. Really love your great economical style with this piece. If Dick Francis wrote erotica it would be like this. Your story made me feel good - good and happy. Dont change a thing. another Hank
      GBF: Pleased you liked it, Hank. Send me an email address, and then I can keep you guys sorted.

Sep 2005
Awwww, Gentle - again with the getting weepy! (Me I mean!) That's twice in a row now... Not that I'd change a thing. Absolutely wonderful, it's peices like this that speak to the soul in the sweetest of whispers. 10.
      GBF: *Gentle whispers* Wow, thanks. You just got a friend for life!

Sep 2005
A very very sexy from you.I believe it is your best by far. With all the wild sex background you tell about this girl, who would have expected such a loving, tender intimate LOVE exchange between you two. Of course the last sentence tell it all! Extre
      GBF: Oh, thanks. I was DRIVEN to write it. Maybe I should take more notice. :-)

Sep 2005
I liked the novelty of the approach - "This is..." - and the slower, sensual and loving end. Sexual relationships can be so varied and this small gem shows that while they can be raunchy and exiting they can also have aspects that run deeper bringing qui
      GBF: Gee, thanks. Now we've seen your sensitive side!

Sep 2005
Could that have been Meg? That was good Gentle....horny.... I loved it. Makes me jealous for a lover like that.
      GBF: No, different girl. Wishful thinking! :-)

Sep 2005
Absolutely remarkably SEXY!
      GBF: Ooh, just what I was after!

Sep 2005
Awwwwwww! How sweet!
      GBF: Gee, thanks.

Sep 2005
Gentle, I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO in love with this story. The best ever. 12 on a scale from 1-10.
      GBF: The cheque is in the mail :-)

Sep 2005
Attention getting with the many brief recollections. Then physical and playful - great combination.
      GBF: Just like your feedback!

Sep 2005
Actually, I thought the twist was done just right. The story itself feels frictionless...
      GBF: Pleased to hear it. Thanks.

Sep 2005
nice Thanks
      GBF: Thanks nice. :-)

Sep 2005
This is the girl... who cant get enough of your great stories ! Never saw that ending coming.. but was wonderful !
      GBF: Shucks. Thanks.

Sep 2005
Wow! Reminds me of all the love, and wildness, and love I used to have...long ago. A great style device...the repitition.
      GBF: I agree. The trick is not to abuse it. Both the love and the repitition.

Sep 2005
Wonderful. Makes me want to throw my keyboard away. Thank you...
      GBF: How are you going to write to me then?

Sep 2005
WOW! Skillfully done and highly enjoyable. Would may a great chapter for a story.
      GBF: Don't start that chapter stuff with me! :-)

Sep 2005
That, my honey, was beautiful
      GBF: :-)

Sep 2005
Nice ending, never saw that coming!
      GBF: Oh, good!

Sep 2005
Nah, I prefer a "full-blown" twist. But thanks anyway.
      GBF: I can't do that EVERY time!

Sep 2005
This is the girl . . . who leads you to write another winner. Gentle, your inventiveness is amazing and delightful. Thanks for a bright spot on a cloudy day.
      GBF: Hey, if I'd know what kind of day it was...

Sep 2005
It's quite artistic, don't you know.
      GBF: Is it? Fluke. :-)

Sep 2005
*finishes reading, teary eyed* That was the most beautiful bit, i've ever read. arrousing, and magnificent and beautiful. Wow.
      GBF: :-)

Sep 2005
at this point, i'm just smiling gently....... i love it this is wonderful just wonderful!!! oh wow for some unexplained reason, this bit is making tears well up in my eyes...... wow!!!!!!!!!! I think -- IMHO -- this is your best.
      GBF: It's certainly your best feedback! Thanks.

Sep 2005
That is one of the sweetest things I have ever read. Wow, Gentle, I like it *very* much.
      GBF: That's it, you can stay permanently now!

Sep 2005
And that was a "10". And I'll be in the ladies' room if you need me. ...don't change a thing sir. Don't change a damn thing.
      GBF: I better make sure I knock. :-)

Sep 2005
love it just the way it is!
      GBF: Thanks!