Fairy Tales
"What? You've got to be kidding. I can't even believe this is for real. I can't do that."
Snow White - Jan 00
Carmine - Feb 01
Alice Part 1 - Sep 03
Alice Pt 2 - Sep 03
The Billy Goats Gruff - and the Troll - Oct 04
Alice Pt 3 - Feb 05
Alice Pt 4 - Jul 05
Alice Pt 5 - Mar 08
Jul 2012
Delightful! You are skilled in making me identify with alien entities as well as with humans. I thoroughly enjoyed this.
Jan 2012
Great !
Jan 2011
that story was awsome do u have any more like it
Jan 2011
Actually, fairly good turn on the old fairy tales.
Jan 2010
Tongue in cheek ( or wherever) and humorous .... Just the right thing for a Saturday morning before going to town!
Jan 2010
A most original and intoxicating story, indeed, I must say.
Jan 2010
nice, but it was over too soon...i was just getting into it.
May 2009
A very nice, light morning read!
Apr 2009
Cute story. It's nice that Red was finally able to get some closure on the whole wolf thing. 8-) I just wish it hadn't been so short.
Apr 2009
Fucking Good. Could have been longer. Keep on with the good work.
Mar 2009
not bad
Feb 2009
more horny graphic details
Sep 2008
Yep love it, please write some
GBF: Umm... I did. :-)
Sep 2008
Great stuff - good flow, clever, and very pleasantly erotic
Jul 2008
Hee hee. Poor Mark. Very silly tale. :-)
Jun 2008
Really nice addendum to Lewis Carroll's original.
Now she needs to get involved in a Caucus-Race that turns into a gang bang, then a few interesting footraces to nowhere and an erotic card game...
May 2008
Loved it. You do such a great job of painting a picture that lets the readers imagination go to work. Your ending left me laughing.
May 2008
I remember you telling me about this one. I finally got to read it, and what a fun story it is. That troll had me laughing aloud. Really funny but oh so sexy. :-)
May 2008
'...Diamond rope, silver chain,
Pretty noose is pretty lame!
And I don't like what you got me hanging from...'
(Soundgarden)
Listen to the whole song, and let her kiss the
snake goodnight.
Apr 2008
I just read The billy goats gruff story and it was very hot.
Apr 2008
Totally different happily ever.
Apr 2008
Cute twist on an old chestnut. I enjoyed it!
Apr 2008
Just wonderful Gentle, and so was Alice, but Alice did not seem to have an ending...
Mar 2008
It's a fun twist on the AiWL story. I'd love to
see you continue.
Mar 2008
Gentle, I wonder if Charles Lutwidge Dodgson aka
Lewis Carroll would approve of this version of
his classic tale.
That's a moot point, I enjoyed it, thank you.
Mar 2008
*laughs joyfully and claps*
Such a wonderful bit of silliness. Neat that you decided to write another part to it. Such a wonderfully sexual mind my freind.
The silliness made me smile, and the seriousness made me hot..
I think i need to go find
Mar 2008
This girl has it going on for sure. I love the story.
Mar 2008
It did put a mischevious grin on my in-need-of-a-shave face and made me read the other two parts again. Well done!
Dec 2007
Just now stumbled on your delightful variation.
Thanks for the yarn
Nov 2007
Most enjoyable telling of Alice in that Wonderful
Land that I have ever heard.
The type "teaching moment" style that I like to
use - the imagination is everything.
Jul 2006
A nice little tale, but I'm not sure the Rev Dodson would approve though.
GBF: Oh, I don't know... There are theories about that man...
Jul 2006
Congratulations. I read because love it and books are a big part of my life. So I search for different authors and different stories- you are that in a nutshell. I love your writing,,,I wish that my style was as unique as yours. your characters seem norma
Jul 2006
Please,you must develop this story. Alice could be in for quite an awakening!! That is provided that the Queen of Hearts does not interfere!!!Don't let it hibernate again--Please. Thank you for the promise of an arousing tale...
GBF: Oh, I don't know about that... It's been a while now... But thanks.
Jul 2006
Very good! A bit low onthe lust but I liked the humerous ending. Yhank you!!!!.
GBF: There's a lust quotient requirement? :-)
Jun 2006
A very interesting version of the story. Very much in the spirit of the joke where
GBF: Sorry, but you gave the story away. I'm glad you liked it though.
Jun 2006
i think it is amazing
GBF: Oh, thanks. I quite like it myself. :-)
Jun 2006
An amusing little tale and another 9, despite:
>Carmine took her hands from his shoulders, and
moved them behind herself, and staring at her lover's face, she began to lift herself fully from his intimate embrace,
She's got her hands behind her bac
GBF: Must have been just using her legs. I have no idea. Why do you keep choosing the old ones? :-)
May 2006
*Smiles in reminiscence* I have dreams where I've managed to lose my panties and am wandering around, trying to find them. I have to say Alice handles the situation with a lot more aplomb than I do!
Oh, and Joey DOES have the best ideas! You did a gr
GBF: Sorry but I had to snip SOME of your message, so you don't give the story away. I'd love to hear more about these dreams... :-)
May 2006
The descriptions of sex were better than your usual (as attested to by my response...but I'll say no more!).
GBF: Sorry, but I had to snip out most of your comment, because you gave the story away. Many thank just the same!
Apr 2006
think it was very good, the ending excellent thank you
Apr 2006
Wonderful--funny and erotic!
GBF: I like to mix 'em up! :-)
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An amusing, and new twist to a classic, almost ancient epic. Is Goldilocks and the three Bears in your repertoir?
GBF: Nope, but I do a mean
Snow white, a
multi-part
Alice In Wonderland silliness, a poem about
GBF: The unexpected is sometimes just what you need!
you are nasty and thats not the real story
GBF: So how much did you have to read to work it out? :-)
Very good! I'll make sure Jenny reads this one - she'll love it.
GBF: Hell, tell everyone!
Alice Pt 2
comments = Nice tale. Administrative note: the link for Alice Pt 3...
GBF: Thanks. Works just fine from here...
This is great! Very clever, takes the most important story elements and perverts them in the nicest possible way. Will Alice have a possible three way withthe Mock Turtle and Griffin as the turtle recounts an orgy between the carpenter, walrus and oysters
GBF: No!
Oh, hold on... Well, maybe... :-)
Hehehe! I loved this series! I wasn't sure what to expect at all from the start.... then it got better and better.... always wondered what "fucking like rabbits" would be like :P
GBF: There's always a part of me that wants to educate! :-)
Great I love reading these "Alice Stories ;)"
GBF: Good. I should write some more then...
Roaring with laughter...Oh, GBF, you are really good. Not sure how many writers could have brought off
GBF: Were you drinking when you wrote this one? :-)
So, now the mask is off, eh?
Catlina = Gentle!
GBF: You're jumping to the wrong conclusion here. Catlina wrote part 3. I did the rest.
"Catlina?"
Come now, Gentle, it's really YOU writing, isn't it?
Please change "that she wa dreaming" to "that she was dreaming."
GBF: I'll fix that. Me? No way!
Passed on to Catlina for comment.
you need to wirte the moal of the story so people can understand the moral is needed in some cases as i am studying three billy goats gruff for english as an assignment so i will need the moral and this website wont help me if there is no moral but otherw
GBF: First off, this is entertainment, not education, so I don't need the morals. Anyway, it would detract from the sex! Secondly, thanks for the kind words. Thirdly, are you sure you're old enough to be reading THIS version of the story? :-)
Grrr! :-)
GBF: :-)
Nice work Gentle, different but sexy & cute.....
GBF: Thanks.
I'll try to be gentle ... :)
(followed by lots of good advice)
GBF: Oh oh....
That waqs fucking retarded
GBF: And yet, it beats your effort without even trying.
Awsome and very fluid!
GBF: fluid???
How can you possibly have a story involving sex with the ***** wherein he eats nobody?
GBF: Well, like this, of course. :-)
I really enjoyed this story. I read all 4 parts back to back because I could not pull my eyes off the screen!! Thx :)~
p.s. part 5???
GBF: :-)
I want more
GBF: Damn! :-)
So far I have enjoyed your take on "Alice in Wonderland" it is probably how the story was supposed to be interpreted in the first place. Not vulgar....just extremely erotic and allows the mind to wonder. You're a good writer with a cool imagination.
GBF: Thanks very much.
The best of the four, by far. I truly enjoyed this one the most. It's the first time I've ever seen anyone taken with the aid of a mind altering substance, lol, but then, the whole land was mind altering. Well done.
GBF: It can only get worse!
Mhmm, just as I thought. I like part two better than part one, and I figured out what the difference was. I didn't find part one had any humor, at least not the sort I've come to expect from your work. This piece did have the humor. I suppose in my mind t
GBF: Ah, that's good!
eh, not sure how to be honest yet polite about this one...let's say it's not as pleasing to me as your other work, but maybe part 2 will be more to my liking.
GBF: Oh oh. :-)
You are very talented. I really liked it a lot.Astounding it is. Write more.
GBF: Gee thanks. Yoda, you are? :-)
ican't wait for part 5 i know that much that brillant took me awhile cuz my ass is slow ~lol~ but i got there and loved every part
GBF: Pleased to have you on board. Five? Oh oh...
it was good creative i like the set up
GBF: Great!
You wrote a great story with Alice. Just finished Alice 4 - full of surprises, unbelievable age changes, and crazy interruptions (the mouse). I enjoyed it but it isn't even near my style. But I have to give you an 8 because it is so well written.
GBF: Thanks. Much appreciated.
This story is real good, I really do like it. Ok I got horny. I'm not going to lie. I guess that was the point of the story but anyway. I just love the way you did it up. It my me look at Alice in a whole different light for some reason. It was real eroti
GBF: Thanks. That was the whole idea. Glad it worked.
This is a real good poem. Kinda different, but it's still good, I have to give you that.
GBF: Heee.. Thank you! :) I never did like to color inside the lines.
Alice pt3 is strange. It shows Alice as a a hot woman looking for some kind of sex that is totally undefined. Part3 is obviously an intro to part 4; as by itself it tells the reader very little about Alice or what is to come.
GBF: Well actually, I didn't WRITE part 4 until after Catlina's part 3 inspired me to! And it might not TELL much, but it FEELS great. (Gentle)
*smiles* Honestly, I don't think it was supposed to make sense, I usually like to leave alot up to the reader's I
THIS IS A FAIRY TALE AND I REALLY ENJOYED IT. GIVE YOU A 9 FOR GOOD IMANINATION.
GBF: Thanks
Heheheh!
More, please! 8)
GBF: Thanks. Glad you liked it.
it was really good! I nearly came but not quite, I need to read the next part! Thanks!
GBF: Nearly? What next part? :-)
This story is very erotic, fun, I love that solo part, I loved all of it, but the solo part really got me turned on. I have to read part 2.
GBF: Yeah, go on then! :-)
Way to go! that put an awesome spin on an old classic. Makes me think of alice in totally new way. Lol
GBF: I wonder if this is good... :-)
My my, sounds like an introspective to me! Enjoyed... different but interesting and good!
GBF: introspective: examining own sensory and perceptual experiences. Hm.
no. not really. Sorry. *Smiles* Thanks though.
this is was amazing, the games with fantasies and that is quite a gauntlet Alice is running!
Love it! MORE PLEASE!
GBF: More? Not yet. Got to work out some details...
very good. thank you for writing it.
GBF: Not at all. Thank you for READING it.
You're really going to have to get worse at this if you expect people to stop demanding MORE MORE MORE GIVE ME ANOTHER PART RIGHT NOW.
See? I can't help myself.
GBF: Goddam! :-)
Cute and colourful. Going to try more like it?
GBF: Nah. Think I'm done.
*Smiles* Thanks for the compliment.
More, Sir. Could I please have some more?
GBF: No, no. Wrong story. :-)
Anyway, Once again you've stunned me with your words. Cant wait for part 5 although i know i'll have too *sigh*.
GBF: Damn, see this is the problem. I was better off with people bitching about Part 3 not being there yet. :-)
Creative and so very disccriptive.
GBF: Thanks. So are lawyers invoices, however... :-)
I thought I had read all of your stories-- but somehow I had missed the beginning of this one.
What fun! More!!
GBF: More? :-)
it is good that u share ur experience
with others
GBF: Experience? Are you out of your mind? :-)
I must second the vote of "more", although it was just a little weird how you need magic to get a suitable guy in Wonderland...
Good stuff, but let's avoid the caterpillar, mmkay?
GBF: Magic? What magic? :-)
Oh, never thought of that... :-)
the scenario is .........weeelll.......... different. The sex is fantastic......easily a ten What a gift you have to romantically describe such a rut.
GBF: Uh huh. Different. Got it. Oh, thanks. Rut??? :-)
You were VERY creative in this. Obviously your imagination was very active during this rewrite. The story is very intertaining and creative. Have to give you a 10 for this.
GBF: Thanks again.
Cute story. A change in pace from the "normal" - if you have a normal! Enjoyed it for some strange reason.
GBF: Pleased you like it.
Clever idea, well realized. Keep up the good work.
On a scale that only rates stories on the web - a 9+.
On a scale where you are competing with Balzac, a very good 6.
GBF: Balzac? Wow, thanks.
Erotica with lots of unexpected plot twists and delicious humor! But oh, my, Lewis Carroll is either turning over in his grave or stroking his cock!
GBF: Well, he did have a reputation... :-)
IT appears Alice needs to run a gauntlet of penises to get her knickers back, the purpose of knickers being the oppositeof the end result of this gauntlet. Interesting reading.. MORE, Please!
GBF: More? :-)
I also read Alice from start to present position.
What a romp!
GBF: You must be worn out!
*purrs* Delicious!! Thank you. Just when I thought the story was winding down, I got to get all excited again.. Yum. - Catlina.
GBF: It's your fault. You encouraged me!
Bit of a giggle, well written and fairly sexy, but not really my cup of tea! :)
GBF: Cup of tea? How appropriate.
If you want a literary critique, your style is fast, grammatically correct and easy reading. Your theme is unique and intriguing, great for sequels.
GBF: The problem with sequels of course is that they are hard to finish...
Oooo, thank you Gentle, that was fantastically erotic! I just love bed-time stories, don't you?
GBF: I just love the feedback
Aside from the fact you had some misspellings, it was intrigueing.
GBF: Passed on to Catlina for comment.
AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! :-D
GBF: *Beams* thank you :)
Mmmm, thanks Gentle, that made me quite horny!
GBF: You have a way with words!
Very erotic and... enlightening. I think I'll move my bed closer to the East window.
GBF: Just make sure the drapes are open
Cute poem. Now how about one that's more specific.
GBF: Specific? *blinks alot* To what?
YUK....................
GBF: *shrugs* Not everything floats everyone's boat the same way.
Clever use of the fable, can immagine, helps my ancient body feel, thanks.
GBF: Passed on to Catlina for comment.
HAS PROMISE. I WILOL BE EAGERLY FINISHING UP.
GBF: Promise? :-)
different but good
GBF: Thank you, I like being different.
What the story may lack in Looking Glass quality, it makes up for in surprise. I like it. Thanks. Please send more.
GBF: Thank you, I think. I've never been very good at structure, Like to play by my own rules too much I guess. But yeah the quality is eh.. Thanks :)
This is a magnificent series. I thought it started a little slow ... that is, like a lot of other fuck stories ... but then I begin to see the storyline better and I love how Alice in Wonderland became a nymphomaniac.
Ok, maybe that's the wrong term
GBF: *Beams* Whee. Thank you. I'll have to think about that last line a bit.. Or Maybe Gentle can Dream up that part.. We'll see.
(There's always a chance - Gentle)
aaaawwwwwwwww..... ok, fairy tales should have a HAPPY ENDING.. but this is ok too. Everyone has a "one KNIGHT stand" in their lives at one time or another dont they?
GBF: You a writer? :-)
Absolutely LOVED It. :D I've read a good half dozen stories now.. all of them are definately arrousing and interesting.
Can't wait for the third part of this one.
[Removed the poem from here, and added it as part 3 of the story]
GBF: Thanks. What third part?
Oh, and thanks for the poem. What a dirty mind you have!
:-)
This was really a nice little story. It's well written and clever. I usually like stuff a bit harder, but I found the romance angle charming. I'm glad I read it.
I also really like your website, it's very well layed out and the format is easy on the
GBF: Thanks. I needed that, after the 1 I got for it yesterday. And I'm pleased you like the site.
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GBF: 1? No address, no comment, and you have the balls to give me a 1? Bloody cheek!
a nice little story. interested to see where you take this. a very hot twist to the classic.
GBF: Thanks.
Nice story...
("And I leered at him" should be "she" i think???? ) Anyway, very nice. and not the typical "eat me" types of erotica take offs of this story.
You do have a way with a "twist" even in a fairy tale!!!
GBF: I'll have to read it again. It's been a while... And thanks.
I love twisting the classics but didn't much care for the present tense style that you used here. That said, I did like the story itself. I hope I never lose my train of thought when I read the original version to a child! ;)
GBF: Now that's strange. No one else ever said that. Perhaps you were overdosing! :-)
Whew- let me know when you re-write "Beauty and the Beast"!
GBF: Hey, there's an idea!
NOT too bad haven't read it fully yet, but looks ok,
I like to read the more erotic style, have you ever had anyone give ideas,
GBF: Most people read it first, and then write to me! :-)
Yeah, I get a lot of ideas. You got something?
I read a few more of your stories this morning and I just have to say you are very good at what you do. I read the Shower, Next Time, and the one about the Billy goat gruff
GBF: Nothing quite like a wholesale reader! :-)
May 2005
very cool, funny and sexy and classy. well done
May 2005
fukin brill!!!
May 2005
I like the way you use heat, sun, warmth [and in the other story, hot water] to suggest sex:
GBF: I hope you read part 2 then!
Apr 2005
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GBF: It really bugs me to get a '1' without any reason or explanation. That's probably not reasonable of me, but there it is.
Apr 2005
OK let's see its good and its real different at the same time. How do you go with a troll, thats some crazy stuff right there. Its real good at the end of it all.
GBF: Pleased I got there for you.
Apr 2005
Interesting. A fairy tale, 'perverted' in an almost perfect Freudian way. Impressive.
I really hope my kids won't read this... ;)
GBF: Well, so long as they are old enough...
Apr 2005
Well, well. Nothing is sacred. Thank goodness. *grin* Hooray for putting a new spin on an old classic.
GBF: I was scared, but not scared enough to stop!
Apr 2005
Fabulous! I just Love twisted fairy tales, and this one was done up VERY nicely indeed. I heartily approve and wish I'd thought to write it myself. Now I'm all jealous and probably won't be able to get to sleep.
Guess I'll stay up with the Brothers
GBF: Thanks. Hope you got some sleep eventually.
You can do another one!
Apr 2005
A very entertaining story and its nice that 'the bad guy' gets some pussy this time. Excellent finish.
GBF: Thanks a lot. The bad guy was pretty good though.
Apr 2005
I am amazed that you can change stories so easily. I read ALICE before so I will not be continuing this series. But I give you a grade of 8 for the past story
GBF: Fast? These took me years!
Apr 2005
OK for a Fairy Tale Give you a seven.
GBF: OK for feedback. Give you an eight! :-)
Apr 2005
Do you think I could borrow Alice for a bit. I'd like to get inside her head (and other spaces) for a while.
This one had me spinning for a bit, not sure where it's going but I suppose I'll be enlightened by the end of part 2 Not your best but pretty d
GBF: Sure, sure. Help yourself. Oh, if you think you're going to be enlightened reading my stories, you're in for a disappointment!
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Very nice and a fabulous leap into the future. I hadn't read this until one of my own readers recommended it. I wrote one in a more satirical vein called 'Little Red Riding Pants'. I can't call it similar to this wonderful story because mine's supposed
GBF: It might have been thoughtful, but it was still silly! Thank you kindly. Oh, and I have written some more...
you might like to look at Alice (pt 1)
(pt 2),
This story right here is crazy, but in a real good way. The story is real good.
GBF: Ah, so you like the classics?
The troll was cute and very sweet, and Lucy was sweet too. Sadly, there are too many Gruffs. Bev
GBF: Thanks Bev. Gruffs are necessary!
very humorus. you are an excellent writer. keep it up.
GBF: Hey, what about the sex? :-)
this story is rom. an i dont know why but to me it was a lil funny. i always love gentle stories even though some are not all that good(just kidden).
GBF: Hey, watch it you! :-) And thanks.
I hope that there is a part3. You evoke so many wonderous thoughts..seems i'd better go and put these thoughts into action. Truly amazing you are
GBF: Not yet... Yeah, go on then! :-)
I want to go to my room... but you have mr intrigued.... i need to read on
GBF: I hope it's worth it!
Another nice mixture of humor and sex. It even has a moral!
GBF: Of sorts! :-)
i love all of your story they be prefect, i always wanted to tell you but i never took out the time to write you and e-mail. so i said i would take out the time today and tell you how feel about your stories i think they are great.
GBF: Wow, thank you very much. I like your feedback a lot, too!
A wonderful sexy take-off on an old nursey rhyme. I liked this one better than the original.:o)
GBF: Thanks. It sure wasn't this spicy when we learnt it at school...
Disney stories are usually longer than this, but that's ok -- maybe you can get more out of some other story? Cinderella? More Greek mythology (Aphrodite's affair with Ares?)
Of course, it might mean you never have to think of more than one creative
GBF: More? Sequels you mean? I'm working on a few... But not those ones.
Cool Story! I really hope you continue this story its good.
GBF: Thanks. Continue? Umm...
its a good story but its not realistic, but ireally liked.....
the big green thing.... Heheehheeh
GBF: It wasn't supposed to be realistic! :-) I'm pleased you liked the green thing!
Really cool story! Nice twist on the classic.
GBF: Thanks a lot.
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GBF: You know, you want to get a girlfriend! :-)
Weird. I'm almost afraid of a Part 3 -- I never cared about the rabbit, but I don't know what I'll think about a bastardized Mad Hatter...
GBF: There's an idea... :-)
When I read this, the only reaction I can think of is: cackle, khakhahakahha. Not laugh, not smile, just cackle, mwaaaaaawaawa.
GBF: Hee hee. Good.
What a way to find happily ever after. Way to go. I like the new spin on the story. with stories like that the stories from child hood will always be with us and be just as interesting.
GBF: There are a few more of these, littered around the site. Read some of the other comments, and you might find them...
If it was any more serious, I could complain about it being too short! Maybe write a similar story about Vogons?
GBF: God forbid any sort of seriousness in this story!
Just read Billy Goats Gruff- and the Troll. Lookn' forward to every thing else. Keep em cummn'
GBF: Thanks. You better get reading if you want to catch up though!
like it so far where is the rest??
GBF: Rest? No one seemed terribly interested...
Part 1 was lacking a lot. Part 2 was much better, but you left me hanging out there. Hopefully there will be a part 3. Maybe one day I can share a story with you.
GBF: What are you waiting for? :-)
Found this story hard to believe and not very exciting. Very predictable. I don't really enjoy stories about the "low-life".
GBF: Can't win 'em all. Thanks for letting me know.
this story starts off as a great sexy story (Alice 1) but a completely different sext story is presented in Alice 2. They are really 2 seperate stories that use Alice as the main character. Both are good, stimulating stories but are NOT related (excepte
GBF: Of course they are related! And knickers are panties!
ugly
GBF: That's it? That's all you can come up with?
Sorry. I liked the original story better. I guess I hold a grudge more that Red Riding Hood did.
GBF: That's okay. I like the orignal too!
What an excitingly moving story. Puts a whole new twist on childrens stories we read about or were told in our younger days. Imagine the time you will now read the "stories" to someone and in truth your mind is thinking about the real story behind the sto
GBF: Thanks. As for other 'classics'... You might like to look at Alice (pt 1)
(pt 2),
Carmine
for similar silliness.
That was really fun. I needed that. Thanks.
GBF: I needed the feedback, so we are even!
I love it!
This is SO funny, and so clever.......
and I LOVE the ending!!!!!
perfect!
thank you.
GBF: No, thank you!
Not a story for the grand kids - but well written.
GBF: Depends how old they are...
i like it it's very "hot" cool story!!! :-)
my mail is*****
if you have more disney storys send me one !!
GBF: Thanks. No Disney stories as such, but a bunch of fairy tales and so on...
The Billy
Goats Gruff,
Alice, pt1 &
GBF: Hey, that's a bit sneaky :-)
This was a really funny tale! Thanks for writing & sharing it with everyone.
Very good i liked this very much,had a good laugh while reading.Keep up the good work.
This is fun, silly, and sexy. The pieces of the story work. The dialog is very good, and expresses the action between Lucy and the Troll without other description.
GBF: Oh, thanks. You say the best stuff.
Cute.......A good take on an old Tale.
As usual......well written.
GBF: Cute? My wife said it was pornographic!
GBF has taken on the thankless task of updating a Grimm tale for audiences of 21st century erotica. The heroine, Lucinda, finds herself in a comprimising situation with the eldest of the brothers Gruff. Lest the gentle reader be concerned that dear Luci
GBF: Here! Trolls ain't animools, are they? Huh? Thanks mate. I'm most impressed. Can you talk to book publishers like that too?
LOL...very nice ending. Silly, indeed, but I couldn't stop reading. How could I read such a story and it be a turn-on at the same time? Well, that's obvious and you have such a way with words...I vote 10's if you can make me feel it...
GBF: Thanks
Just a riot. Thank goodness twisted, perverted, goofy minds like yours also can put it together in written form that makes for great reading. Keep it up! Thanks for the laugh...
GBF: Oh, sorry. I stopped reading when I got to 'perverted'. Pleased you enjoyed it. We all need a laugh.
This was great! I kept hearing that old song "Little Red Riding Hood" as I was reading....
"You're everything a big bad wolf could want..."
GBF: Same thing I heard while I was writing it.
Very well enjoyed, a nice silly tale. More please?
:)
GBF: I'll do my best. In the meantime though, you might like to look at Alice (pt 1)
(pt 2),
Carmine, Snow White,
for similar sillin
Fantastic update to the old story. Like all yours I've read, extremely well-written.
GBF: Why, thank you.
i'm not really into fantasy or scieence fiction stories but you do write good stories and didn't let anyone down this time either. definately a fun story to read
GBF: Thanks.
I'm so glad I found this site! I needed to laugh today... now I just need to find a troll of my own lol
GBF: Well, just be careful around bridges.
A charming little tail. I thoroughly enjoyed the way the story unfolded and the final victory of the heroine over stupidity and self-centeredness. (Is there such a word?)
Keep up the good work!
GBF: She was pretty damn stupid and self-centred herself, don't you think? :-)
A cute twist to the old fairy tale
As usual your style is so neat, as is your perspective. Keep it up - no pun intended I really like the style.
awesome work I needed that silly story this weekend :)
GBF: So did I, Danny. Thanks
Great story....keep them coming
Interesting...
LOL! I try not to read the codes before the story, (at least from authors I know), so after having goat cheese as part of dinner tonight I was expecting something different....
Fun little fairy tale, with a gotta-grin ending.
Thanks!
GBF: Goat cheese? I could have worked that in....
outstanding, humour is spot on, more power to your typing fingers.
GBF: Thanks a lot
Precious not silly! Thanks for sharing...I like being notified when you have another story ready for your fans. Bit edgy bordering on bestiality but after all they had four children...not half-trolls!! Bit of fun for a late afternoon read and a great ki
GBF: More? What is it with you people? :-)
ROFL. I love it! Leave it just as it is, and when you get enough of them, consider marketing "Erotic Fairy Tales" to Olympia Press. It's sexy and a hilarious sendup of the original.
GBF: Thanks. I have a half dozen in here already. You just have to find them.
RUDE! NEVER,
Damm that was a great story.You made me want to be Lucy!
Keep up the great work,keep them cuming!
GBF: Thanks. You can read the other ones now!
This is a cute, fun story. If the Gruffs were Billy Goats, what was Lucy and the Troll? The story's flow was excellent with good editing and grammar. Be happy, look proud, you should be. Very enjoyable reading. Thanks, Mel(Only 40 words, but better'n
GBF: 40 is good. Thanks.
Unusual but quite entertaining and pleasant. Well told and moved well. Thanks for sharing and the advanced notice.
GBF: Thanks. Unusual is usual for me...
Very amusing. Never cared much for trolls. Most of them were Republicans. But trolls and Republicans can have there enlightened side I guess.
GBF: hey, why pollute literature (oh, alright, smut) with politics?
Weird but good. Tongue in cheek I think. Thanks.
GBF: That's two of my stories you think are weird!
Where DO you come up with these ideas?
Goats....and a Troll....???
Nice little parody, very, very funny.
Lucinda's simple mindedness and
conversations kept me laughing.
I don't know much about trolls but
do you think that I could borrow Lucy
for a
GBF: Just products of a warped mind,. Yeah, help yourself. Get her to pick up her own panties this time though, will you?
yeah silly is the word for it, but a nice twist to an old fairy tale; kind of reminds me of the first one I read about the guy who made a special place for the fairies where he took his new girlfriend to make love, again out doors. Is there going to be
GBF: Hey, that's no fair, asking about The Swap in here! Yes, there will!
A fun story. Going to go anywhere with it?
GBF: Go? Waddaya mean? Did you read part 2?
I think you portrayed Alice as if you are a woman. Her thoughts lying in bed of previous lovers etc. Your description of her "making love" to herself is quite exact. Not a turn on for me....but interesting to read about ... I ask..how can man know all tha
A delightful twisty sequel to the old story.
Definitely a different Snow White story!
Gentle, right on,it was insane, but I think everyone is touched with a bit of insanity sometimes.(I read it, didn't I)
That being said, it was well written, witty dialogue and visually descriptive sex.
It had a pleasant ending.
Very pleasant, erotic without being vulgar. It did get me thinking, and it's rather sweet, in a way. Thanks
excellent - really original - where is part three?
Well....you did it. Took a lovely little fairy tale and turned it into a delitefully erotic little story.
Snow White for god's sake, who'd of thought she she was like that. You have a wonderfully twisted mind.
I like the way you think.
GBF: I thought you were going to tell me off there for a minute. Thanks.
far from your best work
Wow...I liked it.....stories like this really get my attention, why, WEREWOLVES of course :)
I've really enjoyed reading these first couple of chapters - after comming accross your most recentyl updated story I decided to read some of your other work.
Do you have any intention of continuign this tale?
GBF: Well thanks... And... Well, yes, but not just now.
I felt more excitement from the suns rays than from Joey... but.. than again... he's just a man.
;-) thanks for sharing,
This story made we so wet .. I had to orgasm .. I went to my room . . .
GBF: That's the idea...
I like the second chapter too.
I will be patient, but I want to see where you go with this story.
GBF: Well, you might be waiting quite some time...
I really like this first chapter of the story. With the focus on Alice and her exploits, we get to know the character, and get some good sex too. A great start, and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
bravo!! :)
The lycanthropy was a pleasant surprise. Short & sweet, with erotic fairy tale characters and a happy ending - Delightful!
I loved it! Beautifully written with stylish ironic dialogue. In fact, I
enjoyed the banter as much as the sex (is this another sign of old age,
Kat?).
Anyone read Roahl Dahl's versions of nursery stories?
An insane story, perhaps, but I liked it.
Great imagery here....
I especially like the fact that your story is so creative and different....
I read your stories first every month.....
I enjoy them very much
I loved the story....
There is so much mileage in these nursery tales, isn't there? They're wasted on kids. I thought for a minute you were going to include a gang-bang with the dwarfs.