2nd Another Time
Adam and Eve: What Could Have Happened
This short story is derived from biblical scripture. In no way is it meant to add to or take from the actual event. The author does not necessarily agree with every idea found in this story. It is meant for fictional entertainment only.
Adam and Eve: What Could Have Happened
Eve ate the forbidden fruit. She handed it to Adam. Her perfectly round, smooth bottom had hypnotized him. He noticed her perfect breasts with cute little nipples that became very erect upon eating the fruit. Adam had never noticed her quite this way. He almost ate but caught himself and quickly destroyed the fruit.
The next day, God addressed them.
"Eve, you directly disobeyed me. Adam, although you didn't eat the fruit, you aren't blameless. In Eve's weakest moment you were focused on her beauty and not her actions. You could have intervened. You will not go unpunished. You have two choices.
Choice #1:
Eve will be banished from Eden. She will eventually die. You may visit
Eve for one hour every seven days. I will multiply her sorrow, pain,
and conception through childbirth. She will desire you until she dies.
She can be with no other man. You will eat of the Tree of Life and
cannot become mortal. When Eve grows old and dies, I will give you
another wife to bring you some comfort. However, your memory and
desire will always be for Eve.
Choice #2:
Every seven days you will spank Eve for ten minutes without comfort.
Then you will tie her to the Forbidden Tree and give her 100 lashes
with a birch. She will become very aroused. Her spend will slowly seep
from her vagina and run down her legs. You will become aroused. Her
punishment will be the extreme pain from the birching and the longing
for comfort and sexual release. Your punishment will be knowing the
intense pain you are causing Eve and longing to give both her and
yourself comfort and sexual release Afterwards, you will leave her
bound for one hour. She will feel the effects of the birching and her
arousal the entire hour. You will also remain aroused during this
time. You will then take aloe and sooth Eve's scarlet, swollen, and
tender bottom. Afterwards, you will finally be able to relieve each
other. Enjoy! You will switch places the following day. The same rules
will apply except you will receive half of Eve's spanking, birching,
and reflection time. This punishment will be forever or until either
of you eat of the Forbidden Tree again in which I will resort to my
original punishment for both of you. Adam, what is your choice?"
"I choose the 2nd punishment with one request."
"Yes?"
"I would like to request that my spanking, birching, and reflection time be the same as Eve's. I love her and do not want my punishment to be any less.
"Done. Your sentence will be begin today."
"Yes God. Thank you for being merciful and not throwing us out of Eden."
He then sat down on the ground and took his beautiful naked wife over his lap for what would be the 1st of infinite weekly punishment (and eventually pleasure) sessions.
Neither of them ever ate the forbidden fruit again.
sarah nada email
I've never thought of Adam and Eve quite like this. This story is really interesting and includes, well, an infinite amount of spanking. Although I'm not religious, I have to admit that I was a little squicked by having God speak in graphic sexual terms about Eve. But it was still sort of hot. Who knew God was super kinky?
Pablo email
Although presented explicitly as a story, rather than as fantasy, fantasy is basically what's going on here, since the exposition gives way very quickly to a long and explicit description of alternative punishments, in a voice that's not especially (OT) god-like. There's no particular motivation for the specific punishments, other than that they sound sort of hot. It works on that level, but I'd much prefer to see the fetishy content worked into a more significant story. That's not to diminish the power of fantasy - it actually works better as part of a coherent narrative.
Haron email
Well, that sort of put an end to the humanity before it started... Never thought of god as such a lecherous old bugger, but it's an interesting perspective.
Marie email
It's always fun to see biblical stories turned into spanking stories. Something inherently naughty about it, don't you think? I enjoyed this a lot! I think there's so much potential with Adam & Eve (well, so did God apparently haha!) and I would like to see more. Maybe someone will write a series.