This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Crazy
By
Joe Whatever
The straight jacketed young woman squirmed in helpless humiliation as the lecherous intern paddled her naked backside.
"Only twenty-five more, sweet cheeks", the intern chortled.
Doctor Leslie had agreed to go undercover at the scandal ridden Asylum. But that was before she knew about their practice of aversion therapy.
The End
© Copyright Joe Whatever, 29 August 2003
Reviews
Trisha Allen <trishaallen(at)mindspring(dot)com>
Great. This mini-saga was quite different. I have never read a story like this, so it appears to be quite original. Even with the limited amount of words, the author told enough, to get the situation across, perfectly. I really enjoyed it!
Pablo <pablo.stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
This reminds me a lot of a Flogmaster story from a few years ago that read like a nightmarish Twilight Zone episode. This one comes with a slightly lighter tone, though. It's almost like a comedy sketch. The central idea is nicely mean and twisted, and seems like a tiny window on a larger story that we'd like to know more about. That's a good sign.
Ladiejj <ladiejj(at)msn(dot)com(dot)com>
This is an interesting mini-saga.. It stands alone but it also leads to a lot of visuals and ideas for more to be added to it. It allows the reader to think. I like the premise here. The spanking is exciting, it has that conceptual yet not entirely wanted kind of feel to it. The author did a good job. Nice writing.
C_Bear <teddybearbrat(at)cableone(dot)net>
I have a hard time understanding this story as it is, it just needs to give more information, but I very much would love to see it developed into a full length story or series because it gives a very interesting start to what has the potential for a very involving tale
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I bet that he's getting an eyeful. I wonder if she finds a way to make him pay for the spanking that he is giving her now. I wonder if she finds a way to take him over her knee. I hope that she does.