This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Lines
This story is written as a thank you to Pluto848 for all of her great stories!
Terri Gives Lisa a Hand
By
Joe Whatever
"The burned hand teaches best." "Remember this is for your old good", Terri added piously, "and it's going to hurt me more than it's going to hurt you!"
Lisa doubted it. The twenty-nine year old executive had always wondered what a spanking would be like, and she was initially delighted when her older friend had agreed to give her a firsthand demonstration.
But she couldn't believe that Terri was going to spank her in front of their Women's Club!
As Lisa looked up at the smiling faces around her she knew she was going to get it good. Mrs. Waters had insisted on corner time. Mrs. Jovers had brought her old wooden hairbrush. Mrs. Patters had brought the punishment outfit.
Damn Mrs. Patters! The blushing young woman was now naked except for a midriff baring T-shirt with Barbie's picture and tight white underpants decorated with smiling pandas!
The thoughtful Mrs. Eves had even brought a camera!
Lisa blushed and squirmed as Terri teasingly traced her finger across a row of the happy, dancing pandas.
Terri knew her friend Lisa could be willful, spoiled, and undisciplined. Taking the little princess down a peg or two was not a wholly unsatisfying experience...
Lisa gasped as she felt Terri's fingers worm their way into the waistband of her juvenile panties.
FLASH! Mrs. Eves caught Lisa's expression: a perfect mixture of shock, horror, and utter humiliation!
"Please, Terri!" Lisa wailed. "I'm twenty-nine!" "You can't spank bare!" "Not in front of everyone!"
"I warned you that I spanked for real, and you would cry real tears", Terri replied sternly. "You didn't think that being twenty-nine would save you from an underpants downer, did you?"
"Kids today!" Mrs. Patters chuckled.
"I can hardly wait to tell my friends!" Mrs. Eves chortled.
"Bare is best!" Mrs. Patters cackled.
"She won't be so snooty with her underpants around her knees".
The verdict was unanimous. Lisa's face turned beet red as she felt her panties slide down, down, down. She tried to ignore the sly chuckles and satisfied smirks of her enthusiastic audience as she studied the carpet.
Lisa's attention was soon diverted to more pressing matters as Terri's hand exploded on her bare bottom in a flurry of spanks. Lisa's tiny bare feet soon kicked her underpants across the room as she shamelessly wiggled her red fanny for her tittering audience.
Terri's palm quickly grew red and sore. Tonight was an important first step in getting her hand back in "spanking shape". Terri knew she would have to gradually build up her strength if she was going to provide Lisa with the discipline she needed.
"A burnt hand teaches best", Terri chuckled to herself as she reached for the wooden hairbrush.
The End
© Copyright Joe Whatever, 29 August 2003
Reviews
Trisha Allen <trishaallen(at)mindspring(dot)com>
Great entry! I liked it. With the descriptions told so thoroughly, it was easy to follow the story. It was also easy to feel her humiliation. Clearly, she wanted to learn about the new avenue for her. But, not to learn about it in front of, what must have felt like the entire world, at that time. Yes, I enjoyed this entry greatly!
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
"A burnt hand teaches best", Terri chuckled to herself as she reached for the wooden hairbrush. Now, this ending line through me, so I'm glad the story started with the line needed also as I wouldn't have liked as well if the story relied on this ending line. It seems as though Terri thinks it is a hard brush paddling that will really teach best this time. I did enjoy the story a lot. Being bared and spanked in front of the women's club was a fine idea. So many women involved in the punishment of one, is a turn on. I liked the dialog also it felt real. Spanking are so much fun to read about and I had fun reading this.
Sir Hal <janhaltn(at)earthlink(dot)net>
The Whow, this story pushed all of my buttons. I totally enjoyed this story and the way is was wrote. The word pictures were clear. The story had a nice flow to it. I could not find anything to complain about in this story. I thought that is was well crafted. It had a good flow to it. I could hear Ms. Patters cackle. The words fit the characters in the story. My only complaint was the author decided to hide behind a pen name. I was hoping to add their name to my must read story list. I hope they let us know when they write again. I know that I want to read more by this writer.