This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-Saga
Cold-hearted Treatment
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He was nervous. She looked stern.
"Trousers and underpants down! Bend over that couch!"
Like an obedient schoolboy he obeyed.
He felt a sharp stab of pain on his right buttock, and winced.
"You can get up now," said the nurse. "That's your flu shot over with for this year."
The End
© Copyright Ebro, 27 August 2003
Reviews
Trisha Allen <trishaallen(at)mindspring(dot)com>
Great story! I couldn't believe how much you were able to achieve in just fifty words. The story didn't appear to be rushed either, as so many stories do with a word limit. Also, I haven't read any stories like this. I read one when the boy was spanked before given the shot because he acted up. This is completely different and original. Even in the limited space, you could feel the emotions the character felt. I certainly didn't expect the last paragraph. It took me completely by surprise. Again, I say, great entry!
Kessily
I thought this one was really cute. It was a tiny bit cliched of course...let people think there will be spanking but NOT!!! Still it was great. I found myself grinning at the end.
Rosa
Cute! This well written mini-saga made me chuckle. :) Please keep writing!
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
You fooled me! I expected a spanking and received a flu shot instead.