This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-Saga
Starship Armstrong
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"SOS Captain! Starship Aldrin. Dead ahead," said Starship Armstrong's Lookout.
"Radio! Tell them Armstrong's coming," ordered the Captain.
"And say the earth moved for him," Spacewoman Fukmiokai muttered.
"Flippancy on duty!" the Captain snapped, reaching for his cane "Down panties. Bend over."
Thwack!
"Me and my big mouth!" she thought.
The End
© Copyright Ebro, 27 August 2003
Reviews
Pablo <pablo.stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
If the premise for a spanking, even in a story this short, is a corny joke, it probably ought to be a really good corny joke. This doesn't really reach very far, so it's somewhat ho-hum. Lots of mixed references, but nothing to really hold it together and give it a reason for having been written.
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
Well, if the Captain is coming then for sure the earth moved for him? So to speak. This was a cute mini-saga. Fukmiokai the flippant seems like a real pistol. Being in outer space makes moving the earth an even more interesting turn of phase.
Sir Hal <janhaltn(at)earthlink(dot)net>
I found this to be a really cute story. Maybe if this method was employed on more ships things would run better. I enjoyed the word picture that this story held. I hope the writer keeps continues with this standard.
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Is the Captain always this strict and does she like it? Very nice job.