This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Fanfiction
Boy Gets Spanked
By
Y Lee Coyote <YLeeCoyote@juno.com>
Boy was whining – again. He wanted the toys like the boys in the village had but his father refused to get them for him. There was the rash of usual reasons – too expensive, not good for you, you don't take care of your things and you got to do your lessons. Of course, the lad did not find any of this convincing.
But he was a resourceful lad and decided get things on his own. Of course, if he had done so honestly, he would still have gotten into trouble (for disobedience and disrespect of his father) but stealing the toy was a major mistake.
A toy is not any fun unless you actually use it and that was the lad's undoing. He was playing with it when then he heard father yelling: "I'm home, Jane." Then it was too late to hide it.
His father saw and questioned – and questioned. Soon the boy confessed all.
He was lectured (as naughty boys the world over are lectured) for the longest time. Then his father yanked the cord about his waist and his loin cloth fell. The dust barely started to rise when he was over his father's lap.
His father was very strong and did not use all his strength in spanking his son but it was more than sufficient. The hard hand, driven by the strong arm crashed into the target with sufficient force to cause significant discomfort in the boy. Soon his bottom was flaming red and hot as a fire. As much as he tried, he could not help but to cry like a little cub.
Soon after still sobbing, he returned to the village and returned the toy to its rightful owner with an apology and promises of never again.
The End
I hope that Edgar Rice Burroughs will forgive my use of his characters, Tarzan, his wife Jane and son Boy.
© Copyright A.I.L., 26 August 2003
Reviews
Mary <Gemladi(at)aol(dot)com>
This was an interesting story plot the Tarzan theme, however I was confused until I read the
authors note at the very end, I didn't get it quote unquote. But it was definitely an
interesting story, not to sure about the use of a cord to hold up a loincloth though giggle but it
was well written in that it kept the reader reading, fast paced,
Patricia <patricia(at)cedar(dot)net>
This is simply another story of a child caught stealing. Granted it is set in the Tarzan
universe, but there is nothing special or different about it. It is just like every other story in
which a child wants something, parent says no, child steals, parent finds out, child is
punished. In my opinion, you could have delved more into the story or characters to make
this story stand out more. You've chosen a universe that not many have used. There
was the opportunity to have it stand out, or make it different in some way. As it stands
now, this story would work equally well if you substituted any family into it.
Pam <PamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
Classic story of Boy going wrong for a toy. However, he learns his lessons and all's
right with the world. The story had a cute premise although not sure why it had to be the
Tarzan family. Could have been any family (except maybe for loin cloth dropping).
Not a bad entry for sure.