This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Child
Nate's Fate
By
Cate Bronte <ouchigirl@hotmail.com>
He was the oldest by two minutes but he was always coming in second to Nadine.
As he carried the laundry basket up the stairs, he could hear her caressing Fur Elise flawlessly from the keyboard. It infuriated him. She did everything flawlessly. He was the screw-up.
But that wasn't why he envied her. He envied her the things in the laundry basket. They were right there, beside his cotton tightee-whitees: lemon, peach, and sky blue panties, all high cut, all slippery nylon.
Nathan deposited his own boring laundry in his room and walked purposefully toward Nadine's door. The basket hid his growing anticipation. He pushed her door to within an inch of being shut, closed enough for privacy and open enough for Fur Elise.
He'd been thinking about this for as long as he could remember. With just a weekend until he left for prep school, it was now or never. He had a plan: do this quickly, no messing about. He was barefoot and apart from his jeans, bare tailed too. The denim rubbed him oddly: he felt stimulated and he felt slightly sore. He liked it and he didn't.
Just a minute, he thought, he'd put them on for just a minute. Fur Elise drifted reassuringly in the air.
Nathan stripped off his jeans, slid the panties over his feet and up his legs until the waistband bumped into his stiffy. He tugged them over his bulge and shivered. They were so light, so soft, so cool. He ran his palms over his bottom cheeks, around to the front, and let his fingers creep slowly to a spot below his navel and then lower, barely brushing the fabric. He wanted to scream but only allowed himself a gasp.
But there was a scream. "What are you doing!?" Nadine's eyes were big as saucers. "You pervert!" she howled.
"Nade...I...." Words failed him.
"Boy, when I tell mama and daddy, they'll kill you."
"Please...please don't tell!"
Too late. Nadine's shout brought their mother to the door before poor Nathan could even attempt to strip off the panties. He'd rather have been caught masturbating normally, but no such luck. He was the screw-up and screw-ups always got caught.
"Go to your room, Nathan. Your father will deal with this when he gets home."
Nathan sulked. "I'll put these back in the laundry for you, Nade."
"ICK! Don't bother. I'll never wear them again, you sicko."
Neither Nathan nor Nadine had been spanked for years, so Nathan was genuinely stunned and scared when his father announced that they were taking a walk to the shed.
Nathan's heart sank as his father unfasten his belt.
"Nathan, I hoped I wouldn't have to do this, but...." his father began.
"I don't know why I did it, Dad. Honest. I never did it before and I swear, I'll never do it again!"
He shut his eyes, leaned forward and waited for the first stroke.
"Nathan. Look at me, son."
His father's panties were pink.
The End
© Copyright Cate Bronte, 27 August 2003
Reviews
Sassy Jo <sassy_jolene(at)hotmail(dot)com>
I enjoyed this story. It was well written and fairly original too. I liked the ending, with the father's special understanding of the situation. I think expanding the perfect sister's understanding might be an interesting part two. Well done author.
Don A. Landhill <dlandhill(at)aol(dot)com>
An interesting story, with an unexpected twist at the end. I liked the way Nate was so obsessed with what he was doing that he forgot to be aware of where his sister was. I could wish that there was some actual spanking, but there is no place to put one without damaging the story.
Ladiejj <ladiejj(at)msn(dot)com>
The writer uses words and images that relay the thought processes of a young man coming to terms with his sexuality. I think that this story flowed allowing the reader to experience the memory with the character. The tone fits with the characters. The end was a surprise, and I enjoyed that.