This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Child
I was on a train yesterday and I saw these two siblings being nice to each other and...this story is the result.
Proper Sibling Behavior
By
Y Lee Coyote <YLeeCoyote@juno.com>
The twins had been warned several times at the family picnic. Now they were back home and being lectured by their parents.
"You shamed us in front of the entire family." said their mother.
"All of your cousins – Jamie and Alana and Dustin and Katrina – behaved properly." said their father. "What is wrong with you two?" he demanded.
The two stood mute. Even if they had an answer they had long ago learnt that silence and starting shamefaced at the floor was the safest option. But that would not prevent the wheels of parental justice turning and crushing all in their path.
"Get the chairs." said father.
"And the hairbrush and paddle." added their mother.
Three minutes later the parents were sitting side by side (a couple of meters apart). Father held the paddle and mother the hairbrush. (It was good enough for my mother, it's good enough for me she thought.)
Sebastian stepped to his father's side and opened his belt and pants and pushed them down along with his briefs. He did not resist as his father positioned him and clamped him into the OTK position. Simultaneously, his sister, Sharon, dropped her skirt and pushed down her panties. She was immediately in position over her mother's lap. The twins eyes met briefly in mutual understanding.
Both the paddle and the hair brush were raised and lowered on the targets many times until both targets were hot and crimson. For each pained cheek there was a eye overflowing with tears. As the implements rained down so did the lectures emphasizing their mis-deeds.
"We'll not have any of this getting along together. You will fight like all proper brothers and sisters do."
The End
© Copyright A.I.L., 26 August 2003
Reviews
Sir Hal <janhaltn(at)earthlink(dot)net>
This was an interesting story. The story was well crafted. I keep wanting to
say that this story was a little weak but I can not point to the reason I feel that way. The
word pictures were clear. They story had a nice flow to it. I think that we are
missing facts about what they did. We are also missing facts about how old they
are. I mean if they were both fifteen, this would be an entirely different story then if they
are six or seven. If I had to guess, and that is what I did, they were about six but that is
merely a guess. Another person might have them at sixteen. I am also left to figure
out if they made any sounds during the spanking or remained mute. Yes, I understand the
limit on the number of words that can be used. I thought that this story had a cute
ending. I hope the writer continues to write.
Kent Stoneking <kentls01(at)msn(dot)com>
A fairly standard parent/sibling punishment scenario gets livened up by the twist at the
end. The pre-spanking lecture, and the twins' reaction to it (how they accepted the
inevitable) were especially effective.
Jessie
I didn't quite get this. I think there could have been a better lead in to the surprise
ending, some suggestion of what went on during the day. The interjection of the mother's
thought about the hairbrush was out of place. The writing was good and the story
complete, but it missed on the irony that I believe the author intended it to have.