This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Line
Saturday Night
By
Valerie Meilong <meilong@excite.com>
"You're Crawford, and you're late."
"OK. I'll go along with that. A schoolgirl Cindy Crawford, eh? Sexy! I like it. Who will you be?"
"A strict headmaster, who's angry with you, and decides to spank you.
"Just for being late?"
"I'm very strict."
"Where we gonna get the gear from?"
"I dunno. Maybe we can rent one from a party-costume store?"
"You won't spank me hard, will you?"
"Of course I will. I am a strict headmaster and I'll spank you until your bottom is red. And with your knickers down, too." Then he whispered four sexy words. "On your bare bottom."
"Ooh! You are awful!"
It was an inane conversation, of course, but that's the sort of rubbish you talk when you're on your honeymoon.
We never did find a school uniform, not that it mattered. He did spank me for being late. And took my knickers down too. And the sex that followed was fantastic.
Ah! That was long ago. Where are we now? Separated. A few years older, many spanks behind us. Enough spanks to satisfy young blood in the early madness of marriage. What a wonderful thing is youth. What a pity it has to be wasted on children.
"Do you spank her," I thought. " Do you take down her knickers? No? Probably takes them down for you, if I know her, and not for spanking either. What's she got that I haven't? Not a spankable bottom, that's for sure."
I refilled my glass. "When you're down, drink up," I said to the empty room, and giggled.
It's three years since we separated. He's never asked me for a divorce. Probably wouldn't give him one anyway. I still love him, the sod.
I'd lost my job. Said I needed rehab. Just an excuse, of course, though I have to admit to some memorable mistakes. Booked the Chairman on the wrong flight, once! God! He was furious! I'm sure he'd wanted to spank me!
If only!
He reminded me of that old bastard of mine; tall, handsome, authoritative. He used to get a hard on just looking at me, my old man, I mean. And use it on me too.
God! I was wallowing. Even through the haze of Scotch I realised it.
It was a Saturday, the worst night of the week. I'd opened a fresh bottle of Scotch. It was raining cats and dogs outside. "It was a dark and stormy night," I said aloud, and made for the stairs.
The front doorbell rang. "Fuck! I said.
I opened it. There he was, handsome as ever, the bugger. He bustled in, and kissed me.
"You're Crawford and you're late." he said. My heart jumped.
"I've got a schoolgirl outfit in my bag. Put it on!"
"Why?" I said my heart beating wildly.
"I'm a headmaster. I'm going to spank you."
He did too! And with my knickers down! And my bottom glowed as he went inside me later.
I'm on the wagon now, incidentally.
The End
© Copyright Valerie Meilong 14 August 2003
Reviews
Sir Hal <janhaltn(at)earthlink(dot)net>
Cute story. Interesting way to tell a story. I felt like I was watching it on TV the word pictures were so clear. I also got the feeling that the person writing the story had a hang over for some reason. I enjoyed reading it. I did not find anything real special in the story but I also found nothing wrong with it. I hope that the writer continues to write interesting stories so we can read them. Good job.
Sassy <sassy_jolene(at)hotmail(dot)com>
I absolutely loved the way this story unfolded. It describes a past love and romance and gives a light at the end of the tunnel. The writing flows fairly well, and the originality is wonderful. GREAT JOB author!
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
I liked the dialog, even though it felt choppy. The choppiness, I believe added believability to the female character's drinking problem. The ending wasn't helped by the choppiness, yet in a short story endings can't go on and on. The smooth use of the line to begin the story put us right into a play scene, what fun! Then we go into upset mode, and come to an ending that is happy. All around a very good story.
C_Bear <teddybearbrat(at)cableone(dot)net>
I loved this story because it uses the same lines in the beginning and end, and I see the symbolism of a new beginning in their relationship. And with his return her stability returns as well and she can finally give up the drinking and have what she lost, hopefully this time to stay.