This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Liar. Liar
By
Valerie Meilong <meilong@excite.com>
His hand landed hard on his teenage daughter's bare bottom.
"Ow! That hurts!"
"Good.. It's punishment for lying." Smack.
"I didn't lie." Smack.
"Ow!"
"Don't believe you." Smack.
"Ow!. Alright then. I did lie. Sorry."
"Don't believe you." Smack.
His erection was hard under his zipper. He was enjoying himself.
The End
© Copyright Valerie Meilong 03 August 2003
Reviews
Redhawk <redhawk(at)screaminet(dot)com>
Good story. I didn't care for the idea that spanking his teenage daughter turned him on but I am not going to downgrade a story because it doesn't mesh with my personal preferences. For the category this story is well written and meets the criteria.
SirHal <janhal(at)midsouth(dot)rr(dot)com>
I wonder how many readers would think that the actions in this story equated to Child Abuse. We have no idea if the girl is thirteen or nineteen. All we know is she is a teenager. If she were nineteen, instead of thirteen would that make a difference? At least the story does bring up a subject we could debate on. But, I also don't think that it breaks any new ground. I found this story to be a rehash of a thousand stories like it.
Rosa
Reading this as a fictional age-play scene, I found it quite humorous, and not unlike some of the moments here at home. :) I'm not sure if that was how the saga was supposed to read, which may mean that you might want to find a way to clarify your intent – OR – that you've written a wonderfully open saga intended to invite a wider range of interpretations. For me, this was a cute and bratty peek into the life of two spankos in spanko land.! Thank you. :)