This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-Saga
Extreme Punishment
By
Valerie Meilong <meilong@excite.com>
His vehemence was frightening. "Dammit, Valerie. You've gone too far!"
He yanked her across his lap, lifted her skirt, and bared her bottom.
"Every day this week I'm going to take your knickers down, and every day you're not getting a spanking," he said viciously.
She wailed at his cruelty.
The End
© Copyright Valerie Meilong 03 August 2003
Reviews
Don A. Landhill <dlandhill(at)aol(dot)com>
Ouch! That isn't nice of him! This entry told a very nice story quite clearly in it's limited compasss, exactly what a mini-saga is supposed to do. And I didn't see the twist coming, either. While this twist has been used before, in fact it is a classic of spanking literature, it is still a good one, and used here quite well. Good work
Warm Hand Jack
This is about as good as it gets in fifty words. The drama is intense throughout, with even the closing response maintaining the intensity. The twist, the whole crux of the story, rests on one tiny – and unexpected – word. Very well done.
C_bear <teddybearbrat(at)cableone(dot)net>
ROFL That's pretty bad that she's been so naughty and is in so much trouble that she doesn't get spanked.... hmmm maybe that's an idea...it could have merit too, do everything else but the smacked bottom scold bare corner time lines ect. just no spanking till the last day. Finish with a real bottom burner and then lots of snuggles. Truly a vicious punishment. LOL :)