This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Tube Dominance
By
Valerie Meilong <meilong@excite.com>
He looked at her bare bottom. It was reddening beautifully.
"You're a naughty girl."
"Ow!"
"A very naughty girl."
"Ow!"
"Naughty girls must be punished."
"Ow! Yes I know. But can you hurry up, darling, please? I want to see that program on Channel 4 at ten o'clock."
The End
© Copyright Valerie Meilong 03 August 2003
Reviews
Mary <Gemladi(at)aol(dot)com>
ROFLMAO that was oh so funny and even gave me some ideas, I am after all a brat. Wonder what her hubbies response was.
Kent Stoneking <kentls01(at)msn(dot)com>
An amusing tid-bit, with a few unanswered questions. I wouldn't mind seeing this one expanded, to get the top's reaction to the closing line.
Trisha Allen <trishaallen(at)mindspring(dot)com>
I found this entry to be unrealistic at its best. The last thing I would think of while being spanked is Channel 4 at ten o'clock. Mentioning it too at a time like that would be unwise. While being punished, it would be too easy to be grounded for the night, missing the ten o'clock show. I've never heard of anyone thinking about T.V. during the spanking. Before yes, but not during it. You want it to stop, but for quite different reasons. Sorry, but to me the last line was impractical Even with the fifty word limitations, I think if you rewrote the last two lines, it would be a great mini-saga.