This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Fanfiction
The Water Gun Caper
By
Y Lee Coyote <YLeeCoyote@juno.com>
Dennis was completely thrilled with his new toy -- the superduper long-range water gun. He was not terribly upset about the rules that came with it -- not in the house (it was not any fun since it could shoot three times as far as the biggest room) and not at adults. He had not meant to hit Mr. Wilson. (He had been caught in the crossfire.) It really was an ac-ci-dent but Mr. Wilson nevertheless was madder than a wet hen.
It was even worse for his mother saw it happen from the porch and screamed. Sadly he drained it at her direction and knew what was going to happen. By the time he got it back some of the other kids would have them and he would no longer have the biggest gun with the greatest range around. And everyone would know he lost it. A few minutes later he was ringing Mr. Wilson's bell.
"Mr. Wilson, I'm very very, sorry that I got you wet." he blurted out. Mrs. Wilson, as always, insisted that he have some of her cookies but then went off leaving the men alone.
"I'm really very sorry that I got you wet" repeated Dennis, "Mom said that I'm to ask you to please hold..." (he was trying hard not to sob like a baby) "...to keep this for a while so I learn my lesson."
Mr. Wilson examined the toy weapon. He recalled the little tiny water pistols he had and how much fun they were. This certainly must be a zillon times better.
"What would your father have done if you shot an grown-up Mr. Wilson?" asked Dennis. "Would he have taken your water gun away."
"No, I don't think so, Dennis." The boy smiled. "He would have spanked me." Dennis stopped smiling and dropped into deep thought in his own private universe.
Mr. Wilson watched him intently. He was motionless like he was frozen in time with the half-eaten cookie halfway to his mouth for at least five minutes.
"Would you spank me rather than keeping the gun, Mr. Wilson; please."
It was the old man's turn to slip into his private universe where (for a change) he remembered being a boy and what was important and what was not. "OK, Dennis. I'll spank you but it will be for real."
Mr. Wilson, moved his chair back and Dennis moved over to his side with the toy. The straps were undone letting the overalls fall to the floor. The tighty-whites soon followed and Dennis was pulled over the waiting lap.
Dennis gripped his precious gun very tightly as Mr. Wilson's big hand spanked his bare bottom until it was cherry red. Try as he might, Dennis could not help but to cry.
Dennis headed home -- his hot bottom very sore but hidden far less important than his superduper long-range water gun still in his possession. «Good ole Mr. Wilson could sometimes be a regular guy.»
The End
© Copyright A.I.L., 21 July 2003
Reviews
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
Well, I am a true Dennis The Menace fan so I enjoyed seeing a story featuring our good, naughty boy, from that show. I liked the idea of a water-gun caper, especially for a summer writing contest. The story brought me back to the TV show and I could picture the action in my minds eye. Wonder what Mr. and Mrs. Mitchell would think of Mr. Wilsons' laying on of hand to Dennis' bare butt? Today poor Mr. Wilson could have been in a lot of trouble himself. But this is fantasy and I enjoyed the spanking Mr. Wilson gave very much. The story fits the Fan Fiction theme very well. I just knew Mr. Wilson would one day get to apply a bit of his own justice to that neighbor boy.
Rosa
Oh, yes! A wonderful tale. I've always thought Dennis had ought to have been spanked a time or two. He's the kind of kid that would bounce right back from a spanking and go right on to his next antic. You've captured that just right! And of course, he will with his trusty super-duper long range.
Ladiejj <ladiejj(at)msn(dot)com>
The author does a good job of capturing the tone of the original series. The story gives visions in black and white instead of color. We can see Dennis's brattiness and Mr Wilson's grumpiness. The story is somewhat normal as spanking stories go, but the fanfic dimension does add to it. The dialogue flows and we come to care for Dennis's plight. The end paragraph is a nice ending to this fun story.