This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Parrot
By
Kingspan <Kingspan1@yahoo.com>
Husband's boss is over for dinner. Apartment is perfect, music is perfect, food is perfect. Why is he looking at me so strangely?
"That's the first parrot I've ever heard count to ten," the boss admits. "But why does he add, 'Thank you, sir. May I have another?'"
Oh. That's why.
The End
© Copyright Kingspan, 20 July 2003
Reviews
Don A. Landhill <Dlandhill(at)aol(dot)com>
This is a very cute and clever mini-saga. It paints the scene deftly in the limited space allowed, and I can just see the moment. Exactly what a mini-saga should do, IMO. Wonderful!
Please keep writing.
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
Mini-review for a mini-saga. Funny, cute, excellent!!!
Trisha Allen <trishaallen(at)mindspring(dot)com>
Parrots have always had a tendency to get us in trouble, or at least tell on us. I just love good parrot stories. Those simple two lines spoken by the boss summed it up and made the story. Can't believe the author said so much, with fifty simple words.
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I wonder what s/he will say to their boss to explain the parrot. I wonder if the boss will want to join in. Nice job.