This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga. Thanks to DJ for the inspiration and a wonderful mini-saga.
Archivist's note: This references
Catastrophizing, Interrupted
by DJ in this archive.
Manic....
By
Plierla Fesserla <PlierlaFesserla@hotmail.com>
Power-on.... Eagerly pressing.
Dial-up.... Anticipation building.
SSS: 56 not downloaded.... Stimulation rising.
SSC-03 Catastrophizing, Interrupted [SAGA], spotted.... On tenterhooks opening.
Angst-ridden script.... Excitedly reading.
«Do you need a spanking, little girl?»... Blood vessels pounding.
Trembling, I replied.... Wonderful ending.
Realisation hits.... I've no little darling.
No trembling buttocks.... Overwhelmingly depressing.
The End
© Copyright Plierla Fesserla, 22 June 2003
Reviews
Kent Stoneking <kentls01(at)msn(dot)com>
Quite a well-crafted little gem! The build-up and let-down of the author's emotions were especially effective. Formerly being in that situation, I can well sympathize.
Jessie
I had to smile at the beginning of this piece; I remember that anticipation while logging on, when I first found SSS. And it moves very well from the amusing start to the sad ending. Nice work.
Ted <quixotoes(at)aol(dot)com>
It doesn't take many words to describe the ups and downs of signing on to our newsgroup, and the author has picked pretty much the right ones. A common experience is captured well here.